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Rorkas
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Lithuania
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zveles
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Croatia
4036 Posts
Member since 28/03/2003 |
 Posted - 03/05/2004 : 20:58:13
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hi rorkas.
it happened to be easier than i tought to be! :)
hope, this would help!
First strip:
-The morning in the New York's apartment of the famous Martina Moon...
- Ahh! The first of the August! The prettiest day in the year... My birthday!
- I'm so happy I was born in the summer... I think I wouldn't bear that on my birthad is falling...
- Snow?
Second strip:
- Snow! It really is snowing! In the middle of summer, there's allready a foot of snow!
- Aaah!
- Sounds like my neighboor Naomi!
- Naomi, what has happened?
- T-t-there... There!
Third strip:
- Naomi... Haven't you been pretty pregnant just yesterday? Don't say you had spontaneous...
- No, Martina... I had not! Look here!
- A baby? Whose baby is it?
- That's what I'm trying to say... I think... I think it's mine!
- Gu.
- Yours? This baby boy is at least six months old! And you were pregnant just yesterday...
- I know, Martina, I know... What is happening here?
Fourth strip:
- Get out! Disapear!
- Auch!
- Speak! Who are you and what have you done to our friend Linda Lee?
- Is that her name? I've never seen her
in my life! And, now...
- ... it happens to look that we are wedd!
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Edited by - zveles on 03/05/2004 21:28:08 |
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mcn
Advanced Member
Croatia
6666 Posts
Member since 28/12/2002 |
Posted - 03/05/2004 : 22:42:12
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Thanks, zveles!
One minor point, irrelevant except maybe for English->Lithuanian translator:
>Don't say you had spontaneous...
When you lose baby on your own, it's called "miscarriage".
mcn
***Utorkom: nova AUKCIJA na Burzi!*** Petkom: MARTINA MJESEC na www.stripovi.com i nova KVINTALOVA TJEDNA KARTICA u Strip Vestima (www.zmcomics.co.yu)!***Ne zaboravite ni MCNov ORMAR!*** |
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seinfeld
Advanced Member
16500 Posts
Member since 04/11/2001 |
Posted - 03/05/2004 : 22:43:01
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First stroke:
-(THE)Morning in the New York's apartment of (the) famous Martina Moon...
- Ahh! The first of (THE) August! The BEST day OF the year... My birthday!
- I'm so GLAD THAT I was born in the summer... I think I COULDN't bear HAVING...
- SNOW(capital letters just to stress her astonishment) on my birthday?
Second stroke:
- Snow! It really is snowing! In the middle of summer, there's allready a foot of snow laying!
- Aaah!Sounds like my neighboUr Naomi!
- Naomi, what happened?
- T-t-there... There!
Third stroke:
- Naomi... Haven't you been QUITE pregnant(better knocked up :-)) ) yesterday? DID YOU had A spontaneous...
- No, Martina... I HAVEN'T! Look , THERE (excitment)!
- A baby? Whose is it?
- That's what I'm TALKING ABOUT... I think... I think it's mine!
- Yours? This baby boy is at least six months old! And IF you were pregnant just yesterday...
- I know, Martina, I know... What is happening here?
Fourth stroke:
- Get out! Disapear!
- Auch!
- Speak! Who are you and what have you done to our friend Linda Lee?
- Is that her name? I've never seen her in my life! And, now...
- ... it SEEMS that we BECOME engaged!
Male korekcije zveles ;-)!
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
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Witchblade
Senior Member
Croatia
2754 Posts
Member since 22/07/2002 |
Posted - 03/05/2004 : 23:27:03
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The verb 'to disappear' is never used that way.
Maybe it should say 'go away' or 'make yourself scarce'  , but not 'disappear'. Yes, it does mean 'to vanish', litterally translated, but an english native speaker would never say 'disappear!'. Maybe a magician would  ...
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"But if of ships I now should sing, what ship would come to me,
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zveles
Advanced Member
Croatia
4036 Posts
Member since 28/03/2003 |
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mcn
Advanced Member
Croatia
6666 Posts
Member since 28/12/2002 |
Posted - 04/05/2004 : 00:29:51
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"Engaged" nije ozzenjeni vech zarucceni, "Neighbour" je britanski engleski ... Ali osnovna poanta je da treba okvirni prijevod, a ne gramaticcki precizan, jerbo che se i tako i dalje prevoditi. Bitno da na litvanskom bude dobro...:)
Ako ikad bude isslo na engleskom, i tako chu tekst kompletno promijeniti...
mcn
***Utorkom: nova AUKCIJA na Burzi!*** Petkom: MARTINA MJESEC na www.stripovi.com i nova KVINTALOVA TJEDNA KARTICA u Strip Vestima (www.zmcomics.co.yu)!***Ne zaboravite ni MCNov ORMAR!*** |
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Djole
stripovi.com suradnik
Serbia
11876 Posts
Member since 03/11/2002 |
Posted - 04/05/2004 : 00:35:57
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Sunce vam žarko, ovde se polomiste od prevodenja, a onamo na topicu Akcija! nigde vas nema! zveles, odmah da si poceo da prevodiš text o Supermanu na engleski! ;)
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seinfeld
Advanced Member
16500 Posts
Member since 04/11/2001 |
Posted - 04/05/2004 : 01:00:05
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quote:
Originally posted by mcn
Bitno da na litvanskom bude dobro...:)
Ako ikad bude isslo na engleskom, i tako chu tekst kompletno promijeniti...
Son of a bitch
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
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seinfeld
Advanced Member
16500 Posts
Member since 04/11/2001 |
Posted - 04/05/2004 : 01:00:37
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quote:
Originally posted by Djole
Sunce vam žarko, ovde se polomiste od prevodenja, a onamo na topicu Akcija! nigde vas nema! zveles, odmah da si poceo da prevodiš text o Supermanu na engleski! ;)
Nice and smooth.
Nemamo sta raditi pa zato
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
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fishleg
Advanced Member
Slovenia
3341 Posts
Member since 03/09/2002 |
Posted - 04/05/2004 : 20:04:55
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quote:
Originally posted by seinfeld
quote:
Originally posted by Djole
Sunce vam žarko, ovde se polomiste od prevodenja, a onamo na topicu Akcija! nigde vas nema! zveles, odmah da si poceo da prevodiš text o Supermanu na engleski! ;)
Nice and smooth.
Nemamo sta raditi pa zato
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
Ako nemas sta raditi onda prevedi sve junake
Ima dana kad se smijem ima noci kada pijem |
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Rorkas
New Member
Lithuania
264 Posts
Member since 17/03/2003 |
Posted - 05/05/2004 : 08:51:35
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Thank you very much :)
When I'll finish translation to Lithuanian I'll let you know.
BTW, what you guys want for this help?
Ja volim stripove!
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seinfeld
Advanced Member
16500 Posts
Member since 04/11/2001 |
Posted - 05/05/2004 : 11:29:01
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100,000 dollar in small, unmarked bills in this order:
50,000 $1 bills
25,000 $5 bills
and
25,000 $10 bills
:-)))))))
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
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globinjo
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Croatia
33493 Posts
Member since 12/09/2002 |
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Rorkas
New Member
Lithuania
264 Posts
Member since 17/03/2003 |
Posted - 05/05/2004 : 16:57:19
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quote:
Originally posted by seinfeld
100,000 dollar in small, unmarked bills in this order:
50,000 $1 bills
25,000 $5 bills
and
25,000 $10 bills
:-)))))))
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
OK, no problem.
Ja volim stripove!
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Rorkas
New Member
Lithuania
264 Posts
Member since 17/03/2003 |
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seinfeld
Advanced Member
16500 Posts
Member since 04/11/2001 |
Posted - 10/05/2004 : 20:03:21
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From left to right:
1.There is also chaos in the street...
2.Where's my HAIR?What am I doing in this UNIFORM?
3.Where's my car?WHICH one is it?
4.I'm not a widow!I'M NOOOT!
5.Like...It's like nobody remembers the last few moths!Like our MEMORY HAS GONE!
6.No,something EVEN WORSE is going on and I think that I know WHAT!
"They say this one has a surprise ending."
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zveles
Advanced Member
Croatia
4036 Posts
Member since 28/03/2003 |
Posted - 10/05/2004 : 22:01:38
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-there's confusion on the streets
- what happened to my HAIR? why im i wearing an UNIFORM?
-where's my car? which one is it?
-i'm not a widow! no, i'm noooot!
-it seems... it seems like no one remembers last couple of months! it seems like our memory has been erased!
-no. something even worse happened and i think i know what is it!
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seinfeld
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zveles
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Rorkas
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