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Pusti
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Serbia
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Member since 20/10/2008

Posted - 12/01/2010 : 22:16:47  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Pusti a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pozdrav svima...ovo je jedan mali pokušaj komunikacije u formi stripa,radna,nedovršena verzija,sa pričom pre i pričom posle!
Nije nacrtan,korišćeni su 3d modeli koje sam napravio u grafičkim programima i potom stavljao u odnose,kadrirao!
Voleo bih da čujem kritiku,komunicira li na nekom nivou...i voleo bih da to neko nacrta!
Uzdravlje!

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Edited by - Pusti on 12/01/2010 22:17:27

mcn
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Croatia
6666 Posts

Member since 28/12/2002

Posted - 13/01/2010 : 13:12:31  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit mcn's Homepage  Send mcn a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Na svakom je nivou dosta hermeticcan. Prvi dojam je zanimljiv, ali nakon pet-ssest stranica sve utone u jednoliccje. Tekst se pritom nimalo ne trudi da pomogne ccitatelju (one dvije opsezzne fusnote su trenutak kad i strpljivom pukne kiccma).

Prebaci topik u "domachi strip", mozzda bude visse komentara, u zadnje vrijeme je ondje zzivo.

mcn
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Pusti
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Serbia
80 Posts

Member since 20/10/2008

Posted - 14/01/2010 : 16:10:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Pusti a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pa,da,u tom pravcu sam i ja razmišljao,trebalo bi ga otvoriti,učiniti razumljivijim...i izbaciti fusnote,naravno...
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