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Torghal
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Posted - 02/11/2011 : 22:18:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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paro
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Posted - 03/11/2011 : 00:31:12  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit paro's Homepage  Send paro a Private Message  Reply with Quote
E jbga, a ja baš očekivao neku Stephen King HC priču..
There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die.
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Torghal
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Posted - 03/11/2011 : 19:25:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 04/11/2011 : 18:09:01  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 04/11/2011 : 20:42:12  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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NESVRSTANI
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Posted - 04/11/2011 : 21:09:31  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send NESVRSTANI a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Smeta mi samo jedna sitnica.
Kad si se već odlučija koristit lokalni/splitski govor, šta je meni fenomenalno jer mi likovi djeluju životno i mogu se totalno ufurat u priču, bilo bi dobro da se toga malo čvršće držiš.
To su stvarno sitnice, al nekako bi mi jače i prirodnije zvučalo da Miro ćeri reče voliN te, a ne voliM te, ovako mi pari da san se sa odličnoga stripa u trenu pribacija na sterilni hrvatski film sa neživotnin i nezanimljivin likovima.
Isto tako od lika ka šta je mirov stari nikad nebi očekiva rečenicu "Mislim da griješiš", prije nešto u stilu "Falivaš sinko"(Uzmi ovo s rezervon, puno bolje ti leži pisanje scenarija nego meni, al nadan se da kužiš šta oću reć)
Doli sve stranke!!!
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Torghal
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Posted - 04/11/2011 : 21:29:33  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by NESVRSTANI

Smeta mi samo jedna sitnica.
Kad si se već odlučija koristit lokalni/splitski govor, šta je meni fenomenalno jer mi likovi djeluju životno i mogu se totalno ufurat u priču, bilo bi dobro da se toga malo čvršće držiš.
To su stvarno sitnice, al nekako bi mi jače i prirodnije zvučalo da Miro ćeri reče voliN te, a ne voliM te, ovako mi pari da san se sa odličnoga stripa u trenu pribacija na sterilni hrvatski film sa neživotnin i nezanimljivin likovima.
Isto tako od lika ka šta je mirov stari nikad nebi očekiva rečenicu "Mislim da griješiš", prije nešto u stilu "Falivaš sinko"(Uzmi ovo s rezervon, puno bolje ti leži pisanje scenarija nego meni, al nadan se da kužiš šta oću reć)

kuzin te...moj problem je sta ja u svom nacinu govora ne govorim cisti lokalni/splitski govor nego mi cesto ulijecu knjizevne rijeci pa sve to valjda pribacujem i na svoje likove...
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NESVRSTANI
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Posted - 04/11/2011 : 22:19:28  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send NESVRSTANI a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Torghal

quote:
Originally posted by NESVRSTANI

Smeta mi samo jedna sitnica.
Kad si se već odlučija koristit lokalni/splitski govor, šta je meni fenomenalno jer mi likovi djeluju životno i mogu se totalno ufurat u priču, bilo bi dobro da se toga malo čvršće držiš.
To su stvarno sitnice, al nekako bi mi jače i prirodnije zvučalo da Miro ćeri reče voliN te, a ne voliM te, ovako mi pari da san se sa odličnoga stripa u trenu pribacija na sterilni hrvatski film sa neživotnin i nezanimljivin likovima.
Isto tako od lika ka šta je mirov stari nikad nebi očekiva rečenicu "Mislim da griješiš", prije nešto u stilu "Falivaš sinko"(Uzmi ovo s rezervon, puno bolje ti leži pisanje scenarija nego meni, al nadan se da kužiš šta oću reć)

kuzin te...moj problem je sta ja u svom nacinu govora ne govorim cisti lokalni/splitski govor nego mi cesto ulijecu knjizevne rijeci pa sve to valjda pribacujem i na svoje likove...

Ma kako san već reka-sitnica.
Samo ti piči dalje.
Doli sve stranke!!!
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Torghal
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Posted - 05/11/2011 : 18:32:36  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 06/11/2011 : 21:21:55  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 07/11/2011 : 20:23:40  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 08/11/2011 : 21:07:15  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 09/11/2011 : 19:31:38  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 10/11/2011 : 20:10:18  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Barker
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Posted - 11/11/2011 : 06:37:14  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Barker a Private Message  Reply with Quote
hehe, rolerkoster napetosti.
Bistro i duboko nebo utociste pruza!
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Torghal
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Posted - 11/11/2011 : 19:29:54  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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paro
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Posted - 11/11/2011 : 19:39:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit paro's Homepage  Send paro a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Jbte, ovdje samo crnjaci neki..
Torghale, dal ti je Edgar Allan Poe nešto u rodu?
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D.J.
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Posted - 11/11/2011 : 21:27:18  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
He, he, he! Covjek je toliko ostar prema svojim likovima da to moze postati kao psovka ili kletva: "Dabogda prosao kao lik u Torghalovom stripu!"
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paro
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Posted - 11/11/2011 : 21:36:24  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit paro's Homepage  Send paro a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by D.J.

He, he, he! Covjek je toliko ostar prema svojim likovima da to moze postati kao psovka ili kletva: "Dabogda prosao kao lik u Torghalovom stripu!"



Ili još gore, ˝Dabogda ti djeca bili likovi Torghalova stripa˝, al to je već krajnja brutalnost..

There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die.
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Torghal
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Posted - 11/11/2011 : 22:29:12  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by paro

quote:
Originally posted by D.J.

He, he, he! Covjek je toliko ostar prema svojim likovima da to moze postati kao psovka ili kletva: "Dabogda prosao kao lik u Torghalovom stripu!"



Ili još gore, ˝Dabogda ti djeca bili likovi Torghalova stripa˝, al to je već krajnja brutalnost..


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Torghal
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Posted - 12/11/2011 : 20:23:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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paro
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Posted - 12/11/2011 : 20:46:19  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit paro's Homepage  Send paro a Private Message  Reply with Quote

Evo ga opet...
Don Vjeko opet dobio nogu i završio u ˝Dubravci˝.
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Darth Ivan
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Posted - 12/11/2011 : 23:17:38  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Darth Ivan a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Don Vjeko strikes back!
jel se on opet sad bude sexao s udatom ženom?
"Nothing lasts forever."
Edited by - Darth Ivan on 12/11/2011 23:18:21
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Deers
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Posted - 12/11/2011 : 23:34:19  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Deers a Private Message  Reply with Quote


bio sam uvjeren da opet halucinira
"Trzaj mišica i nad prazninom sam."
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Torghal
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Posted - 13/11/2011 : 11:19:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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