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Torghal
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Posted - 01/12/2013 : 22:07:14  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Danas sam ima viska slobodnog vrimena i doslo mi je da crtam nesto drugacije nego inace i tako sam pocea ovaj fantasy strip.I dalje ce mi Treca liga bit prioritet a ovo cu crtat povremeno.
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Torghal
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Posted - 06/12/2013 : 20:59:10  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.2
Edited by - Torghal on 08/12/2013 00:57:01
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Torghal
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Posted - 08/12/2013 : 00:57:36  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Zagor12
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Posted - 08/12/2013 : 20:08:38  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Zagor12's Homepage  Send Zagor12 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Big like. Samo nastavi. Pošto i sam volim raditi fantasy priče ovo ću pratiti s velikim zanimanjem.
Z12 je sada Golub, ali sajt je ostao isti:
http://superheroji.com.hr/ - Najnovije iz svijeta superheroja
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Torghal
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Posted - 09/12/2013 : 22:09:08  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.4
Edited by - Torghal on 09/12/2013 22:25:19
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Torghal
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Posted - 11/12/2013 : 23:01:34  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 12/12/2013 : 14:34:24  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Kable
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Posted - 13/12/2013 : 16:14:34  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Kable a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Torghalov Thorgal
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Torghal
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Posted - 29/12/2013 : 20:01:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 01/02/2014 : 14:52:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 01/02/2014 : 14:53:52  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 02/02/2014 : 20:51:19  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 03/02/2014 : 21:04:58  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 04/02/2014 : 20:47:03  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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dicmanjac
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Posted - 04/02/2014 : 21:26:43  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send dicmanjac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Super, interesantno, jedva čekam da vidim što će biti dalje...
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Torghal
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Posted - 04/02/2014 : 22:34:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by dicmanjac

Super, interesantno, jedva čekam da vidim što će biti dalje...


Hvala,bit ce dalje jos puno lipih stvari ali ne smin rec kojih
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supermark
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Posted - 04/02/2014 : 23:19:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit supermark's Homepage  Send supermark a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ovaj pocetak podsjeca na nepomirljive
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Torghal
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Posted - 05/02/2014 : 21:20:01  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 06/02/2014 : 21:45:19  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Torghal
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Posted - 07/02/2014 : 21:15:44  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 08/02/2014 : 05:52:02  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla#14

Misliš li da bi bolje bilo izvedeno, čin probadanje strele, da si kaiš podelio, bar na dva, ili tri dela?

Inače, sjajno i čisto ovo radiš; dubok naklon.
Piši propalo!
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Torghal
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Posted - 08/02/2014 : 15:14:16  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Originally posted by ned_lynx

Tabla#14

Misliš li da bi bolje bilo izvedeno, čin probadanje strele, da si kaiš podelio, bar na dva, ili tri dela?

Inače, sjajno i čisto ovo radiš; dubok naklon.

Hvala za komplimente.U pravu si sta se tice 14.table.Isto to je i meni palo na pamet ali tek nakon sta sam je zavrsia a tada je vec bilo kasno za popravit.
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Torghal
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Posted - 09/02/2014 : 22:19:58  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 10/02/2014 : 04:39:57  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Prosto mi se čini, kao da se plašiš da pokreneš kameru; iz donjeg rakursa, sve bi ovo više dobilo na težini. A, čini mi se, i samo rasparčavanje zadnjeg kadra. Šta mislim kada ovo govorim? Detalj strele, i kiše, bi bio efektniji podeljen na kadrove u okviru same table.

Tipa: Luk koji zapinje strelu, strela u letu, strela pogađa cilj.

Sve ovo je amatersko glupetanje, uzmi ga u obzir, ili nemoj.
Piši propalo!
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Torghal
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Posted - 10/02/2014 : 15:02:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by ned_lynx

Prosto mi se čini, kao da se plašiš da pokreneš kameru; iz donjeg rakursa, sve bi ovo više dobilo na težini. A, čini mi se, i samo rasparčavanje zadnjeg kadra. Šta mislim kada ovo govorim? Detalj strele, i kiše, bi bio efektniji podeljen na kadrove u okviru same table.

Tipa: Luk koji zapinje strelu, strela u letu, strela pogađa cilj.

Sve ovo je amatersko glupetanje, uzmi ga u obzir, ili nemoj.



Uzet cu u obzir,naravno.Svaki prijedlog i dobronamjerna kritika su dobrodosli.
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jurica
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Posted - 10/02/2014 : 16:16:45  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send jurica a Private Message  Reply with Quote
e, a meni iz nekog razloga tvoji stripovi budu čitljiviji i zabavniji kad ih crtaš ti nego kad ih crta neki zanatski kompetentniji crtač.

nemam pojma zašto, ali bojim se da to nema veze upravo sa vrlo konzervativnim kompozicijama kadrova. drugi faktor je sigurno tvoja vrhunska vještina raskadriravanja i postavke table koja je uvijek u svrhu pripovijedanja, nikad bespotrebnog kićenja.

ALI - vidio sam i one table koje je Dupli neko vrijeme radio po tvojem stripu i nisu mi zadržavale taj specifično tvoj ritam/čitljivost. a ako nekome prije i nije bilo jasno - Na mjestu vojna bi svakome tko ju je vidio i makar malo čitao morala izvan svake sumnje staviti činjenicu da je i Dupli SAMO TAKAV majstor stripovskog pripovijedanja...

nemam pojma što želim reći. da naprosto pokušaš ostati sam sebi vjeran i pičiš po osjećaju? ima smisla to što ned_lynx kaže, naravno. pa ipak se bojim... uf... sjeban je posao to crtanje stripova. nekad i kad su svi pravi sastojci u miksu rezultat ne bude bogzna kakav, a nekad čista improvizacija poluči sjajan okus i miris.
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