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K.R.
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 27/04/2013 : 13:41:20  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit K.R.'s Homepage  Send K.R. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Evo završih ovaj do sada najduži strip koji sam uradio, pa da podijelim ovdje. Počeo sam na njemu još u februaru ali zbog obaveza tek sam sinoć završio zadnju tablu iako sam bio nabrijao tempo da radim dvije table dnevno. Uglavnom, malo sam se zezao sa nekim tehnikama pa sam koristio kolaže i sjeckao smeđi papir za pečenje (grayscale scan) za neke podloge i strukture. Ostalo je rapidograf, akvarel i nekoliko nijansi digitalnih sivih tonova.
Svake kritike dobrodošle!

Ovdje su malo slike blury pa koga zanima veća rezolucija ima na mom blogu http://www.kostjaribnik.com/ (i ne zaboravite provjeriti i ostale moje stripove tamo). Također, imate i naš strip "Winter Song" na novoj sekciji web stripovi - http://www.stripovi.com/index.asp?page=online-comics-frontpage

Naslov: Sleep Museum
Autori: Ella Gall (scenario), Kostja Ribnik (art/lettering)
Mjesto i godina proizvodnje: Sarajevo (BiH) 2013.
Jezik: engleski
Žanr: Mistery, Cyberpunk, Romance, Tea drinking
Tehnički podaci: 16 stranica, grayscale
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Editovano - bilo je nekoliko tehničkih grešaka u letteringu u prvoj verziji, sad je popravljeno.

Edited by - K.R. on 12/12/1989 14:12:13
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Edited by - K.R. on 23/05/2013 09:57:49

Deers
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Croatia
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Posted - 27/04/2013 : 19:36:19  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Deers a Private Message  Reply with Quote
odličan!

"Trzaj mišica i nad prazninom sam."
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K.R.
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 15/05/2013 : 13:23:02  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit K.R.'s Homepage  Send K.R. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
E, hvala!

Edited by - K.R. on 12/12/1989 14:12:13
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maddox031
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Croatia
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Posted - 23/05/2013 : 10:03:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit maddox031's Homepage  Send maddox031 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlicno, crtez odlican, prica super, stvarno super :)

Eventualno posto je engleski mozda malo netko tko je upoznat s stilistikom engleskog jezika da dotjere neke recenice, jer vjerujem da neke izjave ne bi engleski govornici rekli tako.

Sve u svemu, odlicno :)

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K.R.
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 23/05/2013 : 10:32:07  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit K.R.'s Homepage  Send K.R. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hvala na komentaru maddox031.
Da, vidjet ćemo još za stilistiku, moguće da nam prijatelj Englez još malo provršlja po tekstovima. Dosta toga i ja zbrljam u letteringu, sinoć sam tek ispravio nekoliko suludih grešaka.

Za sada se možemo izvlačiti da je to neki čudan engleski iz neke druge dimenzije :)

U svakom slučaju drago mi je da ti se strip svidio. I Deersu isto.

Edited by - K.R. on 12/12/1989 14:12:13
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maddox031
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Croatia
1941 Posts

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Posted - 23/05/2013 : 10:51:38  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit maddox031's Homepage  Send maddox031 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Naravno, uzevsi u obzir okruzje radnje u stripu, takav neki ustogljeni engleski se cak i uklapa ;)

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cerichus
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 23/05/2013 : 10:56:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send cerichus a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlično ti je ovo. Baš me raduje da se strip scena u Sarajevu "pojačava" polagano.

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