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Crtac
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478 Posts

Member since 20/11/2016

Posted - 01/06/2018 :  10:15:05  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
P.Wilding-hvala. xilrion-Slazem se da se likovi stapaju sa pozadinom,pokusacu da to otklonim,prva tabla ,santa fe i 13 tabla uradjene su zadnje zbog promena u scenariju ,sledecih 9 tabli su od prosle godine i na njima radim pojedine kadrove ponovo.Sest tabli izbacujem zato sto nemaju dinamiku i zbog svega druga epizoda ima da se oduzi ,hvala na komentaru xilrion.
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Zox
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1179 Posts

Member since 04/06/2002

Posted - 11/07/2018 :  16:56:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Zox's Homepage  Send Zox a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Crtez definitivno sve bolji i bolji. Nisam siguran sta pokusavas s bojom: na zadnje dvije table si sve pomjerio ka sivoj osim nebo i ovu neku oker nijansu.
Moj savjet je da se vratis korak unazad :)
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Crtac
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478 Posts

Member since 20/11/2016

Posted - 13/07/2018 :  20:48:06  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Zox ---Eksperiment nije uspeo vracanje sledi u sledecoj tabli.
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Tata i sin
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333 Posts

Member since 01/07/2016

Posted - 15/07/2018 :  23:56:24  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tata i sin a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Slažem se sa Zoxom da se vratiš korak unazad sa kolorom, ali bih dodao da se ne zaustavljaš sa eksperimentima, nego da nastaviš dalje da tragaš za autentičnim stilom koji će odražavati tvoj umetnički identitet.
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Crtac
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478 Posts

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Posted - 16/07/2018 :  05:44:31  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tesko je biti autentican kada godinama citas francuski .belgijski ,spanski strip...crtez uvek ispada kao varijacija francusko- belgijske skole. Dok sam vezbao zeleo sam da mi crtez sto vise lici na njihov i sada i da zelim bilo bi tesko promeniti stil crtanja (a ne zelim) .U narednim tablama pokusacu- da mi likovi sto bolje glume,malo procistiti crtez,kadriranje podici na visi nivo,vise igranja sa senkama...Znaci ,Tata i sin,to je stil koji je mene osvojio i preostaje mi samo da budem konkretniji u daljim tablama .
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P.Wilding
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Croatia
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Member since 21/05/2018

Posted - 17/07/2018 :  17:48:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send P.Wilding a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Samo naprijed! ;)
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borislav
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120 Posts

Member since 15/10/2017

Posted - 19/07/2018 :  10:14:28  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Konj u srednjom kadru izgleda ko da je polomijo prednje noge. A I zadnja lijeva mi ne izgleda realno.
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Crtac
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478 Posts

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Posted - 19/07/2018 :  11:59:02  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ovaj kadar je nacrtan pre godinu dana ,,, malo preterivanja u crtezu je prihvatljivo,nisam zeleeo da u njemu nista menjam zato sto je dinamika kadra dobra .
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njofra32
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637 Posts

Member since 28/02/2017

Posted - 20/10/2018 :  08:51:30  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send njofra32 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlično
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Crtac
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Posted - 21/10/2018 :  09:09:08  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
njofra32 - hvala
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igor-frik
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Croatia
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Member since 23/10/2011

Posted - 19/11/2018 :  22:18:39  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send igor-frik a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ja sam inače veliki ljubitelj western tematike..ovo je stvarno dobro
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njofra32
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637 Posts

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Posted - 19/11/2018 :  22:46:06  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send njofra32 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Meni western broj 1.
Crtac radis odličan posao. Samo udri
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Crtac
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Posted - 23/11/2018 :  13:47:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Vlladimir
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Posted - 19/12/2018 :  00:09:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Vlladimir a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Posted - 18/11/2018 : 14:56:21 - drugi kadar, trebao si veci low angle ugao da uhvatis da se liku koji je pogođen vidi i glava/grimasa, postigao bi vecu dramu i dinamiku scene.

Posted - 23/11/2018 : 13:49:38 - drugi i cetvrti kadar, pogladi na glavama i fizionomiji lica, uši ti mnogo beže na gore, na oba lika u levoj strani kadrova 2 i 4.

Posted - 14/12/2018 : 08:23:36 - poslednja dva kadra, izbegavaj 2D prikaze struktura, jer se previse uklapaju u pozadinu i deluju previše ''nalepljeno''. daj im malo 3d šmeka, odradi ih bar pod nekim blagim uglom.

Al' sve u svemu, od prve stranice teme na ovamo, vidi se veliki napredak. Samo cepaj napred. I ne bi bilo loše da uz rad malo proučavaš neke pristupe kadriranju tipa ''Undertaker'' ili ''Blueberry''.
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Crtac
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478 Posts

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Posted - 19/12/2018 :  01:19:41  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Dobro si ti to Vlladimire zapazio pokusacu da to ispravim ,ali ucenje od "Bluberija"necu te poslusati,previse stripova je nacrtano koji dosledno prate njegov stil i kadriranje(Undertaker,Kolorado,Durango,Wanted...pokusacu da ucim od drugih...
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Vlladimir
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Posted - 23/12/2018 :  03:22:02  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Vlladimir a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlična tabla.
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njofra32
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637 Posts

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Posted - 06/01/2019 :  13:17:29  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send njofra32 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlično
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P.Wilding
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Croatia
37 Posts

Member since 21/05/2018

Posted - 15/01/2019 :  13:01:31  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send P.Wilding a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Meni je ova kompozicija kadrova skroz dobra. Samo naprijed!
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Crtac
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Posted - 19/01/2019 :  11:30:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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njofra32
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Posted - 19/01/2019 :  11:38:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send njofra32 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ovaj lik što stoji u dnu mi vuce na Hermanov stil
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njofra32
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Posted - 19/01/2019 :  11:50:41  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send njofra32 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ovaj lik što stoji u dnu mi vuce na Hermanov stil
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Crtac
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478 Posts

Member since 20/11/2016

Posted - 19/01/2019 :  12:07:55  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ako malo bolje pogledas vuce i vise nego sto mislis, da Herman je moj profesor vec 40 godina ...
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P.Wilding
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Croatia
37 Posts

Member since 21/05/2018

Posted - 19/01/2019 :  14:06:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send P.Wilding a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlično! Koji program koristiš?
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Crtac
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478 Posts

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Posted - 19/01/2019 :  14:23:05  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
wacom intous CTL480 --- photoshop
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Crtac
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Posted - 29/01/2019 :  08:18:03  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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