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AdamEer
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 10:38:19  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pozdrav svima koliko vas ima

Ovo je jedan strip na kojem radim u slobodno vrijeme.

Radni naslov je SPIRALNI PAD.

Nadam se da ćete uživati.

Tabla 1



Tabla 2



Tabla 3



Tabla 4
Edited by - AdamEer on 30/03/2024 08:19:38

velka031
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 10:54:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send velka031 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Bravo, ooodličan crtež!
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ivanl
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 10:55:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ivanl a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Imas sve vec predodredeno, zamisljeno i zavrseno sto se tice teme?
Meni je najs!
Glavni lik ima 'produzeni osmjeh', netko mu ga je nozem prosirio? Gadno.
Samo naprijed!
Los cukar na fritulama!
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AdamEer
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 11:48:00  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by velka031

Bravo, ooodličan crtež!


Hvala puno!🙂
Edited by - AdamEer on 04/06/2022 11:48:26
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AdamEer
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 11:51:05  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by ivanl

Imas sve vec predodredeno, zamisljeno i zavrseno sto se tice teme?


Da, strip je kompletno napisan; po trenutnoj procjeni trebao bi izaći na nekih 200injak tabli.

quote:
Originally posted by ivanl
Meni je najs!
Glavni lik ima 'produzeni osmjeh', netko mu ga je nozem prosirio? Gadno.

Je, je, biće još o tome😁
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Shaner
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 17:42:50  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Shaner a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pratit će se.

http://onlineimpressions.blogspot.com/
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Deers
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 17:47:30  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Deers a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Dobro to izgleda!
"Trzaj mišica i nad prazninom sam."
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ivanl
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Posted - 04/06/2022 : 18:14:10  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ivanl a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by AdamEer

quote:
Originally posted by ivanl

Imas sve vec predodredeno, zamisljeno i zavrseno sto se tice teme?


Da, strip je kompletno napisan; po trenutnoj procjeni trebao bi izaći na nekih 200injak tabli.

quote:
Originally posted by ivanl
Meni je najs!
Glavni lik ima 'produzeni osmjeh', netko mu ga je nozem prosirio? Gadno.

Je, je, biće još o tome😁


🤞🙂👍
Los cukar na fritulama!
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AdamEer
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 10:10:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 5
Edited by - AdamEer on 30/03/2024 08:20:14
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AdamEer
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 10:11:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Shaner

Pratit će se.




Samo se naoružaj strpljenjem

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AdamEer
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 10:12:40  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Deers

Dobro to izgleda!


Hvala puno!
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ivanl
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 18:11:12  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ivanl a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Nista, sad se ovo prati...
Ja hocu.
Los cukar na fritulama!
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Milazzo
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 18:46:18  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Milazzo's Homepage  Send Milazzo a Private Message  Reply with Quote
👍👍👍
https://www.instagram.com/wanderereclectic/ // https://abadon.hr/
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xilrion
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 20:12:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit xilrion's Homepage  Send xilrion a Private Message  Reply with Quote
fino, fino. samo naprijed!
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naker
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Posted - 07/06/2022 : 20:12:44  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send naker a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Na prvu loptu stvarno ne izgleda loše, pratiće se
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AdamEer
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 09:50:28  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 6




Tabla 7
Edited by - AdamEer on 30/03/2024 08:20:50
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Paka01
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 09:56:57  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Paka01 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Bravo, samo naprid, pratit će se
Tabla 2, kadar 3, kao da je Risso crtao
Would a new flood please finally come? A real rain and an assortment of plagues
And when all is said and done, even the Devil won't care enough to spit in the mud

https://www.last.fm/user/Pakaa
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AdamEer
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 10:28:58  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Paka01

Bravo, samo naprid, pratit će se
Tabla 2, kadar 3, kao da je Risso crtao


Ufff, koji kompliment!

Definitivno jedan od najdražih crtača, i sigurno će biti još njegovih uticaja na mene.

Hvala, druže!
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Beva
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 13:21:18  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Beva a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Zasad uopće nije spor ritam izbacivanja stranica, upravo suprotno :)

Sviđa mi se kadriranje, sve je jasno, lako se čita, stil dobar i zanimljiv.

Ima nekih anatomskih grešaka, ali u globalu nisu toliko bitne. Recimo, stranica 3, na drugom kadru muški lik ima preuske kukove u odnosu na gornji dio tijela. Primijetio sam to jer i sam često muku mučim s likovima koji dižu ruke u zrak :D.

Priču ne mogu još komentirati, neka se nakupi još stranica. Čitat će se, samo naprijed!
Jubilarni Polo 10!http://forum.stripovi.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=51213
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AdamEer
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 14:04:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Beva

Zasad uopće nije spor ritam izbacivanja stranica, upravo suprotno :)

Sviđa mi se kadriranje, sve je jasno, lako se čita, stil dobar i zanimljiv.

Ima nekih anatomskih grešaka, ali u globalu nisu toliko bitne. Recimo, stranica 3, na drugom kadru muški lik ima preuske kukove u odnosu na gornji dio tijela. Primijetio sam to jer i sam često muku mučim s likovima koji dižu ruke u zrak :D.

Priču ne mogu još komentirati, neka se nakupi još stranica. Čitat će se, samo naprijed!


A šta ćeš, ko radi taj i griješi

Ritam izlaženja će se vjerovatno znatno pogoršati kad ispucam već završene table, jer ovo se sve radi u rijetkim slobodnim trenucima, nakon što posao, porodica i druge obaveze uzmu svoj dio vremena

A moje prokletstvo je što sam sebi zadao grafički stil (kvazi-realizam) koji ne dozovljava puno prečica
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Beva
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 16:25:51  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Beva a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by AdamEer

A šta ćeš, ko radi taj i griješi


Svete riječi!

Inače, glavni lik me podsjeća na Boucqovog Janitora:
Jubilarni Polo 10!http://forum.stripovi.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=51213
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AdamEer
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 20:35:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Beva

quote:
Originally posted by AdamEer

A šta ćeš, ko radi taj i griješi


Svete riječi!

Inače, glavni lik me podsjeća na Boucqovog Janitora:




Huh, nisam čitao, ali izgleda zanimljivo.

Je l' misliš na izgled ili karakterno?
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emirem
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Posted - 11/06/2022 : 22:19:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send emirem a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Dobar crtez!
Tehnika je koja?
Tablet, komp?
"Kompromisi u kolekcionarstvu su one stvari koje ce ti omoguciti da dozivis starost sa pozamasnom ustedjevinom!"
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Beva
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Posted - 12/06/2022 : 01:16:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Beva a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by AdamEer

Huh, nisam čitao, ali izgleda zanimljivo.

Je l' misliš na izgled ili karakterno?


Izgled, djeluje kao isti lik sa dvije različite stilizacije.
Jubilarni Polo 10!http://forum.stripovi.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=51213
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AdamEer
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Posted - 12/06/2022 : 10:37:52  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by emirem

Dobar crtez!
Tehnika je koja?
Tablet, komp?



Radim uglavnom tradicionalno - papir, olovka, tuš i markeri (u ovom slučaju sivi, biće na kasnijim tablama i drugih boja).

Onda baloni i upisivanje teksta u Photoshopu, eventualno još malo dorade ili korekcija po potrebi.
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AdamEer
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Posted - 12/06/2022 : 10:38:43  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit AdamEer's Homepage  Send AdamEer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Beva

quote:
Originally posted by AdamEer

Huh, nisam čitao, ali izgleda zanimljivo.

Je l' misliš na izgled ili karakterno?


Izgled, djeluje kao isti lik sa dvije različite stilizacije.


Fali mu glazgovski osmijeh
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