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Boston Jack
stripovi.com suradnik
166 Posts
Member since 26/05/2010 |
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Torghal
Senior Member
Croatia
1938 Posts
Member since 27/09/2004 |
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Tintilinic
Senior Member
2955 Posts
Member since 15/07/2013 |
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7053 Posts
Member since 21/07/2002 |
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ned_lynx
Senior Member
2323 Posts
Member since 06/08/2005 |
Posted - 09/11/2014 : 02:44:09
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Sve je to dojajno, no, mene grebe nešto što me više vuče na gledanje Wroooooooomp!!!
Zar je baš ta neonka morala da bude učesnica u onomatopeji? |
Piši propalo! |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
Posted - 09/11/2014 : 11:22:38
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quote: Originally posted by ned_lynx
Zar je baš ta neonka morala da bude učesnica u onomatopeji?
U pravu si, i meni je to zapalo za oko.... ali to su samo probne (radne) table da vidimo kako scenarista/crtac/kolorista funkcionisu kao tim. |
www.deviantart.com/kriticni |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
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Torghal
Senior Member
Croatia
1938 Posts
Member since 27/09/2004 |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7053 Posts
Member since 21/07/2002 |
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Torghal
Senior Member
Croatia
1938 Posts
Member since 27/09/2004 |
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Tonto
Advanced Member
7656 Posts
Member since 11/02/2012 |
Posted - 03/02/2015 : 21:20:19
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Mislim da bi u prvom kadru bilo bolje da je zemlja jednobojna, bez ovih vijugavih tamnijih linija. Osim toga obojano je izvrsno. |
The less I have the more I am a happy man |
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Tintilinic
Senior Member
2955 Posts
Member since 15/07/2013 |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
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Boston Jack
stripovi.com suradnik
166 Posts
Member since 26/05/2010 |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
Posted - 20/04/2015 : 18:14:46
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quote: Originally posted by Boston Jack
Bravo momci, odličan kolor i crtež! Sad još samo treba vidjeti kakva je priča :)
Pa ne mozemo furati table s tekstom, ovo sam samo malo ubacio cisto da zagolicamo mastu.
Svakako, hvala na paznji i kritikama. |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
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Zox
Senior Member
1183 Posts
Member since 04/06/2002 |
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7053 Posts
Member since 21/07/2002 |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
Posted - 21/04/2015 : 18:53:11
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quote: Originally posted by Zox
Ovdje se fakat nema šta reći, u tom žanru, to je zaista to!
Sisa Hvala Zox
quote: Originally posted by D.J.
Bravo! Koji detalji, a opet jako pregledno! Za koji ti to format radis?!
Hvala Sefe... pa americki valjda, zar se ne vidi? |
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7053 Posts
Member since 21/07/2002 |
Posted - 21/04/2015 : 19:13:15
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quote: Originally posted by kriticni
quote: Originally posted by D.J.
Bravo! Koji detalji, a opet jako pregledno! Za koji ti to format radis?!
Hvala Sefe... pa americki valjda, zar se ne vidi?
Da samo to je za neku super deluxe verziju! Ako te "Vrancuzi" vide nema ti spasa s tom detaljnom arhitekturom. Napustit ces ti "Freedom Fries" za good ol' "Pommes frites".
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
Posted - 21/04/2015 : 19:41:44
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quote: Originally posted by D.J.
Da samo to je za neku super deluxe verziju! Ako te "Vrancuzi" vide nema ti spasa s tom detaljnom arhitekturom. Napustit ces ti "Freedom Fries" za good ol' "Pommes frites".
Francuzi u srcu
Wiki eto kaze da je ovo standard! E sad, mozda se u medjuvremenu nesto promjenilo kod vas preko bare, ali evo da te obradujem ovim putem, i Davorov strip je u istom formatu, sto ce reci - spremi se za deluxe izdanje |
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zokalav
Senior Member
2011 Posts
Member since 24/08/2010 |
Posted - 22/04/2015 : 21:23:40
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Odlično je sve kritični! Meni jedino para oči krupan font na tvojim tablama i malo veći prored između redova. |
Edited by - zokalav on 22/04/2015 21:24:39 |
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kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts
Member since 04/12/2009 |
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