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Crtac
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349 Posts

Member since 20/11/2016

Posted - 11/12/2017 :  19:12:40  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Crtac a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Borislave ono sto vidimo nacrtano u kadru ne trba objasnjavati u propratnom tekstu.Bilo bi korisno i lakse pracenje radnje kada bi se ova dva junaka po necemu karakteristicnom razlikovala.Procistio si crtez,pozadina hvali ali ako si tako zamislio onda ok.
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borislav
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Member since 15/10/2017

Posted - 08/01/2018 :  19:52:42  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Evo još strana 43. Strip ide prema kraju, ali imam još puno stranica u olovci.


Edited by - borislav on 08/01/2018 20:15:48
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borislav
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Posted - 08/01/2018 :  20:13:40  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Stranica 42 još u olovci.


Edited by - borislav on 02/02/2018 22:54:55
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Tonto
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Member since 11/02/2012

Posted - 08/01/2018 :  21:04:38  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tonto a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Vidljiv je napredak u stilu i anatomiji, vjerujem da vjezbom to moze doci do kvalitete potrebne za ozbiljnije bavljenje stripom. Vrijeme je da se pocnes baviti rijesavanjem ocitog problema kojeg imas u crtackom pripovjedanju...poput onog da se likovi u kadru koji prvi progovaraju trebaju nalaziti s lijeve strane radi lakseg citanja. Preporucam mccloudov "kako crtati strip"... biblija za takve stvari.

The less I have the more I am a happy man
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borislav
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Posted - 24/01/2018 :  21:39:28  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Strana 6. Sada puno primjenjujem četkicu za sjenke i spoljašnje linije. Zanimivo je crtanje četkicom, mogu se ustvariti zaista lijepe linije, skoro same od sebe, ali imam utisak da bi morao nabaviti bolji tuš,ovaj sada je prerijetki.


Edited by - borislav on 24/01/2018 22:43:37
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izivko
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Germany
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Member since 25/07/2003

Posted - 25/01/2018 :  00:10:00  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send izivko a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Previše crnila oko guze

Have mercy
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mogorovic
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1638 Posts

Member since 02/08/2013

Posted - 25/01/2018 :  13:31:11  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send mogorovic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pa, nije ovo strip za Tuttu!
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borislav
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Posted - 25/01/2018 :  20:25:16  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
A možda bi bilo bolje da guzu prekrijem?
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bisley
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Croatia
1014 Posts

Member since 08/06/2005

Posted - 26/01/2018 :  07:50:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send bisley a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by borislav

A možda bi bilo bolje da guzu prekrijem?


Nema potrebe!
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mogorovic
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Posted - 26/01/2018 :  10:55:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send mogorovic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Neka drage, male guze!
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Zox
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Posted - 26/01/2018 :  11:41:09  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Zox's Homepage  Send Zox a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Jedino sto meni izgleda malo komicno da je samo guz izasao iz kadra :O
Pored toga, svidja mi se jako tvoj potez i nacin kadriranja. Vidi se da se trudis da prikazes radnju na najbolji nacin.
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borislav
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Posted - 02/02/2018 :  22:53:47  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Evo istuširana i finiširana strana 42. Konture sam radio četkicom, sjenke sa najtanijim perom. Na peru mi se tuš brzo sušio. Koji tuš najradije primenjujete.

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borislav
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Posted - 15/02/2018 :  21:16:32  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send borislav a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Istuširana strana 30. Istuširano imam več ili tek malo više od pola stripa.

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mogorovic
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Posted - 15/02/2018 :  23:12:55  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send mogorovic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Da joj je lijeva ručica bar malo veća...
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