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bisley
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Croatia
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bisley
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Croatia
1194 Posts
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Posted - 28/12/2010 : 15:48:29
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quote: Originally posted by cat claw
@bisley mocno, ali bas ofrlje. kao skica ok ali i na njoj ima da se radi. narocito kod nogu... Uopste ih nisi nacrtao ispod tunike. I, ono sto me prilicno nervira kod svih koji se zalete pa crtaju objekte same za sebe bez saglasja sa okolinom. Naime, zadnji deo tunike (ogrtac?) bi se vukao po podu da nema dramskog vetra. Znaci automatski da ne pripada doticnom. za scenu 4, za razmisljanje kec (ko vrata)     Da je pozadina u visini struka a ne u ravni sa glavom, za scenu bi dobio 5
Nadam se da je dovoljno za ispraviti keca. Ako nije, na skici imam i tvrđavu iza u pozadini i nekoliko likova pa ću i njih ubaciti na crtež, pa ako treba za pozitivnu ocjenu i obojiti čitavi crtež.
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cat claw
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Posted - 28/12/2010 : 20:15:03
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Tehnicki jako dobro. Jednooki ti je malo neuhranjen, al ajde, nismo svi Svarcenegeri. Moze i ovaj Dzo Koker Spanijel.... Vitez u pozadini je dosta los, narocito premalo lice i otrgnuto desno rame. Popravio si keca, ali nisi zablistao. btw, srednjovekovni macevi nisu imali mali stitnik za ruku kao rimski macevi. Naprotiv.
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bisley
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Croatia
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cat claw
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milandj3
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Serbia
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Member since 17/08/2006 |
Posted - 30/12/2010 : 13:41:01
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quote: Originally posted by cat claw
Neces verovati, za jedno prepodne. Bio sam mlad, imao dobre oci i puno zivaca
a onu iz arizona heat gde kolona vozila noću prelazi most kad su krenuli u poteru? to je kadar da se smrzneš |
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cat claw
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 13:56:58
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Hm... Malo je automobil iskekecen.... Most je sa fotografije i koristio sam lenjir pa je to malo usporilo. Mislim da sam se ceo dan zezao sa tom stranom....
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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milandj3
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Serbia
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 14:35:08
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quote: Originally posted by Beva
Bane, a zašto ovaj dijagonalni željezni dio s lijeve strane nije u perspektivi? To mi toliko bode oči dok ovo gledam, uf... Gdje je tada bio Jur sa svojim savjetima :)
ma ko će gledat' most. gledaj čoveče kako je rešeno osvetljenje.   |
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 14:53:57
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quote: Originally posted by milandj3
quote: Originally posted by Beva
Bane, a zašto ovaj dijagonalni željezni dio s lijeve strane nije u perspektivi? To mi toliko bode oči dok ovo gledam, uf... Gdje je tada bio Jur sa svojim savjetima :)
ma ko će gledat' most. gledaj čoveče kako je rešeno osvetljenje.  
Sve je to meni logično i jasno kad netko drugi uradi... Kad trebam sam, e tu nastaju problemi :) |
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cat claw
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 15:11:51
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quote: Originally posted by Beva
Bane, a zašto ovaj dijagonalni željezni dio s lijeve strane nije u perspektivi?
E, to moras da pitas fotografa koji je slikao most. Ja sam samo preneo sa fotografije.   Moj blam je sto sam lose uklopio auto  |
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cat claw
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 15:16:03
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Cekaj malo, pa sve je ok sa dijagonalnom preckom. Sest stubova dugacka kao i ona na pocetku mosta.... Meni je sve tu OK. Osim auta koji je cetiri stuba dugacak, znaci najmanje 12 mwtara... |
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Jur
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Slovenia
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 16:06:08
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Pa nema nekih vecih problema oko perspekitve. Ocigledno to je jedan manji jednosmerni most. Pre par postova je bilo rijec o crtanju metala - evo ovaj auto je primjer kako ga crtati. Sa cistim linijama in povrsinama treba prikazati odsjaje in senke na 3d konturama objekta.
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Jur
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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cat claw
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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cat claw
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 18:27:14
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Ni meni se ne uklapa, ako cemo pravo, al moram da se branim  Zaista ne znam. Tako je na fotografiji a ja se nisam potrudio da malo 'slazem' radi utiska. Apsurd kao sa sakom ispruzenom prema nama. Mislim da je u pitanju paralaksa sociva fotoaparata, no dobro. Nisam ni ja sve znao tada kad sam crtao. Za razliku od danas kada sve znam, gne gne gne....    |
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cat claw
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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bisley
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Croatia
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 19:20:44
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quote: Originally posted by cat claw
Ni meni se ne uklapa, ako cemo pravo, al moram da se branim  Zaista ne znam. Tako je na fotografiji a ja se nisam potrudio da malo 'slazem' radi utiska. Apsurd kao sa sakom ispruzenom prema nama. Mislim da je u pitanju paralaksa sociva fotoaparata, no dobro. Nisam ni ja sve znao tada kad sam crtao. Za razliku od danas kada sve znam, gne gne gne....   

Da, debljina stupova je u perspektivi, ali ne prati je metalna ograda mosta. Kad bi metalna ograda pravila kut (strelica 2) radi statike mosta bilo bi logično, ali nije tako jer ograda ide ravno, odnosno prati most (strelica 1). Možda je unutarnja strana metalne ograde trebala ići odmah uz (betonske) stupove. Tako bi se postigla perspektiva
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cat claw
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Beva
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 30/12/2010 : 20:05:20
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quote: Originally posted by cat claw
A za auto, kad se ovak 'izmeri' vidi se koliko ne valja. 
Znaš zašto auto ne izgleda čudno? Zato što nigdje ne piše da je razmak između osi stupova 3 metra... Meni sa slike djeluje da je razmak dosta manji, pa i auto izgleda normalno...
Jer inače, ako dužina ne valja, ne valja ni širina... A sve se to fino riješi definiranjem manjeg mosta... Ako je na referenci širina između stupova i bila 3 metra, kod tebe je metar i po i mirna Bosna :)
Jer, na referenci je vjerojatno bio dvotračni most, a ovaj kod tebe može proći samo kao jednotračni jer se tu možda i mogu mimoići dva mala auta, ali kamioni nema šanse...
uglavnom, zaključak, auto izgleda OK... |
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Jur
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