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Zeljko Ferri
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Posted - 25/07/2011 : 16:02:17
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Hteo sam da postignem lezernost, malo oslonjenog na kuk...mada, zaista je bolje sad. Sad mu nista ne fali :D Dobar je kakvih ima medju crtacima u Zagor staffu... |
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Zeljko Ferri
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Serbia
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Zeljko Ferri
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Serbia
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Rico
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Croatia
3955 Posts
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Posted - 25/07/2011 : 19:29:20
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Vako ja vidim probleme kod tebe. ne znam oš me poslušat il nečeš. Zagor ti je mrtav, od drva, bez života, ruke su mu mrtve, svi prsti su u istom položaju, iste duljine, glava prevelika, ili tijelo prekratko, kako hočeš. Imam osječaj da previše paziš kad ga crtaš, kao da imaš tremu... nean pojma. Probaj crtat s kistom, eventualno?
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Zeljko Ferri
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Serbia
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Rico
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Croatia
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Zeljko Ferri
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Serbia
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Lord Vader89
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France
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emirem
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10824 Posts
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Posted - 29/07/2011 : 18:34:01
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quote: Originally posted by Lord Vader89
cizme, they don't work
Platfus... Samo ti crtaj ni ja nisam nesto bolji stavit cu jednom nesto...  |
"Kompromisi u kolekcionarstvu su one stvari koje ce ti omoguciti da dozivis starost sa pozamasnom ustedjevinom!" |
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Zeljko Ferri
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Serbia
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PijaniPatak
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Germany
10035 Posts
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PijaniPatak
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Germany
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bubo
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
1399 Posts
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Rick
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Serbia
900 Posts
Member since 21/01/2009 |
Posted - 11/09/2011 : 20:33:06
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Evo i od mene jedna olovka...
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"Duh Sa Sekirom nikada nije zaista napustio Darkwood. I dalje pazi na svoje kraljevstvo i nasledje. I ponekad se javi, kao pozdrav, ili opomena, kako kome." |
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bubo
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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seinfeld
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16500 Posts
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Posted - 25/09/2011 : 19:41:42
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quote: Originally posted by Rico
Vako ja vidim probleme kod tebe. ne znam oš me poslušat il nečeš. Zagor ti je mrtav, od drva, bez života, ruke su mu mrtve, svi prsti su u istom položaju, iste duljine, glava prevelika, ili tijelo prekratko, kako hočeš. Imam osječaj da previše paziš kad ga crtaš, kao da imaš tremu... nean pojma. Probaj crtat s kistom, eventualno?

Staticno. Mrtvo.
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"I'm not saying I'm Batman. I'm just saying nobody has ever seen me and Batman in a room together." |
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Cromwell
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Croatia
4486 Posts
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Posted - 25/09/2011 : 20:51:47
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Slažem se. Linije su nekako jednolične, kao da je crtao stroj a ne covjek. Ali je zato lice pogođeno perfektno. Onaj Zagor na lijani ne valja ništa, stopala, prsa, lijeva ruka i usta su začuđujuće loše odrađeni uzimajući u obzir da Željko ima neke stvarno odlične crteže. Mislim da su još uvijek najveći problem te previše savršene linije koje daju dojam ''plastičnosti''.
@bubo: nije loše, pravi gusti Darkwood na prvom crtežu. Daj još 
@rick: maknuti tu maskaru sa očiju, i popraviti te zube/usne. 
@pijani patak: uff malo preprljavo, možda bi ruke trebale bit mrvicu dulje i ramena šira |
Bok, kako si.
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Cromwell
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Croatia
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PijaniPatak
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Germany
10035 Posts
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Posted - 29/09/2011 : 00:27:02
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quote: Originally posted by Cromwell
@pijani patak: uff malo preprljavo, možda bi ruke trebale bit mrvicu dulje i ramena šira
Ma to mi je prvi crtez nakon ne znam koliko vremena. Evo ovde je malo noviji.
 Kako vidis, i kako su mi neki forumasi vec rekli (hvala im), ceka me jos dosta vezbe. Ali, kako vec rece Zeljko Ferri, nije toliko ni lose. Video sam i gore
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DNEVNIK CITANJA: Etika junaštva i deklišeizirani koreni u “Zagor prica...”
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bubo
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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bubo
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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bubo
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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wolland
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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PijaniPatak
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Germany
10035 Posts
Member since 20/02/2010 |
Posted - 15/10/2011 : 20:56:54
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Voleo bih komentar na ovaj crtez, iako sam u svom topicu dobio negativne ocene na crno-belu verziju. Crtam iz cistog hobija, da smirim ose u glavi kada se spremam za ispite, ali imam volje da malo u tome napredujem. Problem je sto, uprkos preporukama da to uradim, nemam ni vremena ni volje da trazim pogodnu literaturu na internetu glede anatomije i sl. (a za caskanje na forumu imas, pizdune?) Dok sam bojao ovo na Corelu (tu mi tek treba prakse, kako bojati bez da osakatis crtez za silne linije) smanjio sam Zagiju glavu, pa za gornji deo tela sam sebi ne mogu naci ozbiljnijih primedbi. Ali nesto mi ne stima oko nogu, prelaz sa struka na butine i predeo cizama. Molim savet. Sta ne valja i kako to da ispravim? Ako valja ista, ama ista, sugerisite da znam oko cega da nemam komplekse
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DNEVNIK CITANJA: Etika junaštva i deklišeizirani koreni u “Zagor prica...”
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PijaniPatak
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Germany
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