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goran split
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Posted - 23/09/2011 : 14:21:56
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quote: Originally posted by cat claw
Pa da se posle pitamo da li je Zvone njegov sin? ![](lol.gif)
mozda bi to objasnilo njegove reakcije na cilu situaciju ![](icon_smile_tongue.gif) |
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Torghal
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Posted - 23/09/2011 : 17:25:54
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quote: Originally posted by cat claw
Odmah da kazemo, Thorgal ce aminovati likove. Ja primedbe dajem sa nekakve... hm... urednicke pozicije, ako dozvolite. Potsecanja radi, urednici su face koje scenaristi i crtaci podjednako mrze. Tatu bih ostavio crnog Mami bih stavio neuredniju kosu, neku ofucanu hladnu trajnu... Zvone bi morao imati blazi izraz ociju. Meni se on cini u celom stripu vise povredjen nego besan. Elem, ne bas da budu tuzne obrve, ali svakako ne ovako namrstene. OK kad je besan, al za obicne prilike bi trebalo da je blazi.
Slazem se sa svime sta ste napisali pogotovo sa ovim za majku...don Vjeko je super.Ja mogu aminovat likove iako mi ne bi bia problem ni da vi to napravite...ja mozda bolje poznajem te likove ali sta se tice crteza tu ste vi puno,puno mjerodavniji za nekakav sud. |
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Darth Ivan
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Croatia
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Posted - 23/09/2011 : 17:32:39
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quote: Originally posted by dupli
Ne, baš si ti glavni za komentare jer znaš kraj, a to može uvelike utjecati na izgled likova. Hvala svima na pohvalama. Ima tu prostora za značajna poboljšanja, a i vid mi se polako vraća pa idemo dalje.
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dupli
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Deers
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Torghal
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Croatia
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Posted - 26/09/2011 : 16:06:26
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quote: Originally posted by dupli
Izgleda da tema i nije baš popularna. Šteta.
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Odlicno si ovo nacrta...cak si ubacija i nesto svoga(ovo sa izgorenom crkvom) sta mi se stvarno svidja. |
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Snake Plissken
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dupli
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Rico
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goran split
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Torghal
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cat claw
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Croatia
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Posted - 28/09/2011 : 22:50:13
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kada se mirakul iz tandema torghal/dupli dovrši i krene u izdavanje, ne dao vam bog da se ne objavi i originalni torghalov crtež to bi bilo izdanje godine |
if you tolerate this, then your children will be next |
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Torghal
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Darth Ivan
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dupli
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Posted - 30/09/2011 : 11:20:29
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S obzirom da je Torghal reko "to je to" nakon urednikovih intervencija, nastavljamo se igrati produkcije. Koliko mi je poznat proces sada se uredniku i scenaristu šalju one žvrljotine (kako im je službeni naziv?) gdje se vidi postavka table, likova i slično.
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Žvrljotina:
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Torghal
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Posted - 30/09/2011 : 17:27:46
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quote: Originally posted by dupli
S obzirom da je Torghal reko "to je to" nakon urednikovih intervencija, nastavljamo se igrati produkcije. Koliko mi je poznat proces sada se uredniku i scenaristu šalju one žvrljotine (kako im je službeni naziv?) gdje se vidi postavka table, likova i slično.
Scenarij:
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Žvrljotina:
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Odlicno kadrirano.tek sad vidim di sam moga bolje kadrirat.Sta se mene tice odlicno. |
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Amos
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PijaniPatak
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Posted - 15/10/2011 : 22:51:56
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Mozda nisam najkompetentniji da dam komentar na ovo, ali jako mi se svidela prica (Bravo Torghy) pa bih sugerisao nesto. Majka na prvoj slici mi je karakterno mnogo vise onoj koju je autor predstavio citaocima. Mora biti vise prgave naravi i mnogo odbojnija kao lik i da ne iska od citaoca previse sazaljenja (u drugoj slici skoro da zaplace). Posto im je zivot sjeban, njen odbrambeni mehanizam odvratak karakter a ne tihi lament kako je prikazano u drugoj. Otac, s druge strane, uopste ne reprezentuje tihog i odanog muza koji masta kako ce zenu poslati dovraga. Na slici izgleda strog i psihicki jako stabilan. Nije od ljudi koji pate u tisini i koji nema muda (ili je izgubio volje) da protivreci ikome. Mislim da je taj utisak zbog obrva. Malo ih poravnajte da budu manje prirodne namrstene. Ostali su i po meni, sto bi Torghal rekao, 'to je to'.
Tehnicki nemam zamerki. Dupli je odlican crtac i u tom stripu bih voleo videti bas ovakav stil crtanja, sa cistijim i jasnijim kontrastima, bez filozofiranja sa prevelikim brojem detalja. Svaka cast Dupli!
I bez zamerki molim. Stalo mi je da ovo bude bas dobro, posto je podloga za to i vise nego solidna. |
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