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PijaniPatak
stripovi.com suradnik



Germany
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Member since 20/02/2010

Posted - 13/05/2014 : 12:16:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send PijaniPatak a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Blanko table su odlične. Sretno ti!

Savet: da sam na tvom mestu, isprintao bih sebi blanko tablu dva-tri puta i mrljavioo bih po njima dok ne se pronađem. Fora je u eksperimentisanju, ali bez da ono bude fatalno po lepo izvedene uratke. Proširi sebi granice tako što ćeš eksperimentisati na nečemu što možeš ladno kasnije baciti

komentar: nije mi baš sretno izvedeno senčenje likova na prvoj tabli: kaiš 2, kaiš 3 (srednja sličica) i kaiš 4. Ništa loše, samo subjektivni utisak
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
2770 Posts

Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 16/05/2014 : 21:11:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Crtez je jako lijep, a sto se sjena tice, tu ti ne mogu nista pametno reci, jer i sam eksperimentisem. U svakom slucaju, sretno ti bilo. :)
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 06/06/2014 : 00:06:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hvala na savjetima, komentarima...
Evo, da vas malo drzim u toku

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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik



USA
7144 Posts

Member since 21/07/2002

Posted - 06/06/2014 : 00:56:16  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Sto je sad ovo gospodine Tardi, neke rovovske bitke?
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 06/06/2014 : 11:58:21  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by D.J.

Sto je sad ovo gospodine Tardi, neke rovovske bitke?


Ma zao mi Davora, isprepadali ste ga s komentarima za "Savrsenu buducnost" pa rekoh da malo skrenem paznju haha...

Ovo je omaz prvom svjetskom
Ne mogu ga jos cjelog postaviti, jer ucestvuje na nekom konkursu, postavicu ga pocetkom jula.
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 04/07/2014 : 15:30:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Jedna kratka prica povodom obiljezavanja stogodisnjice pocetka Prvog svjetskog rata
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Edited by - kriticni on 04/07/2014 15:33:01
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Poli
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Slovenia
38181 Posts

Member since 26/10/2007

Posted - 04/07/2014 : 17:00:02  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Poli a Private Message  Reply with Quote

Zajebano!


A za strip


Anything is possible dec d uej
Be the Change You Want to See
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 19/07/2014 : 15:20:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by Poli


Zajebano!
A za strip


Hvala Poli. Djelimicno po istinitim dogadjajima iz ww1.
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

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Posted - 19/07/2014 : 15:22:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Mali apdejt, olovka...
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kriticni
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Serbia
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Posted - 03/09/2014 : 16:13:57  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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kriticni
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Serbia
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Posted - 08/09/2014 : 17:49:39  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Tintilinic
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2955 Posts

Member since 15/07/2013

Posted - 08/09/2014 : 18:30:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tintilinic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ovo je odlično kriticni!
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik



USA
7144 Posts

Member since 21/07/2002

Posted - 08/09/2014 : 21:22:37  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by Tintilinic

Ovo je odlično kriticni!

Bome je! Tus cist ko suza, lijepo bi i boja na to sjela!
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PijaniPatak
stripovi.com suradnik



Germany
10035 Posts

Member since 20/02/2010

Posted - 10/09/2014 : 15:21:36  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send PijaniPatak a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Kapa do poda i za crtež i za strip gore! Ovo je sjajno!

Ali...je li ono gore Lazarus ili mi samo liči?
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bisley
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Croatia
1196 Posts

Member since 08/06/2005

Posted - 10/09/2014 : 19:01:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send bisley a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Da ne ispadne da baš svi hvale, evo ja sam danas dežurni žandar...
Kod prve slike, palac desne ruke je u neprirodnom položaju. Da ovako stoji trebao bi biti slomljen



Kod table, 1. preduga podlaktica za dužinu dlana,
2. kut ženine lijeve ruke je neprirodan koliko god lijevo rame bilo spušteno i
3. lijevo rame i lijeva ruka rijetko se podižu da ih ne diže trapezius. Na crtežu nedostaje taj mišić između ramena i vrata...




Inače, ostalo

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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 23/09/2014 : 22:19:36  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hvala na pohvalama i kritikama tintilimintili

Didzejson, znas da smo boje i ja na "vi"

Dranki, hvala na pohvalama... ne znam kako Lazarus izgleda, sorry

I naposljetku bisley, tebi najvise hvala na konkretnom potezu. Ispravljeno sve navedeno.

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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik



USA
7144 Posts

Member since 21/07/2002

Posted - 24/09/2014 : 02:30:51  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Fino, fino! Tko kaze: "Punk is dead"?!
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Tintilinic
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2955 Posts

Member since 15/07/2013

Posted - 28/09/2014 : 22:01:37  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tintilinic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 29/09/2014 : 19:57:16  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pank iznt ded di.dzej.

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IGMAN2
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Member since 08/05/2003

Posted - 29/09/2014 : 20:56:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send IGMAN2 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Svaka čast, Kritični, masovne scene su ti super.
Čestitam na strpljenju
Je su li ovi stripovi po narudžbi ili za svoj gušt... pa ono- možda i uvalim nekom
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 29/09/2014 : 22:03:52  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by IGMAN2

Svaka čast, Kritični, masovne scene su ti super.
Čestitam na strpljenju
Je su li ovi stripovi po narudžbi ili za svoj gušt... pa ono- možda i uvalim nekom


Hvala IGMAN2

Ove zadnje tri table (plus jos jedna) bi uskoro trebale da izadju u jednom strip magazinu, stoga i ne stavljam tekst. Ako se urednik slozi stavicu i verziju sa tekstom.
Takodjer mozda bude i verzija u boji, otom potom, kolorista je trenutno u skripcu s vremenom, ali nesumnjivo ga vredi cekati
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velka031
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Croatia
17109 Posts

Member since 18/03/2010

Posted - 17/10/2014 : 00:19:58  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send velka031 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Kritični, sjajan si! Svaka čast.
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 18/10/2014 : 13:11:33  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hvala velka031

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Edited by - kriticni on 18/10/2014 13:16:57
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 19/10/2014 : 22:49:30  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts

Member since 04/12/2009

Posted - 04/11/2014 : 23:22:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Najava nove saradnje sa Torghalom

Kolor opalio Ddeki

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