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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 19/01/2015 : 13:43:43  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Moj novi projekt. Prva prica ce imati oko 15 tabli.
Evo za pocetak tri table.





Edited by - Brdar on 25/05/2015 19:30:32

delboj
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Member since 01/03/2004

Posted - 19/01/2015 : 14:06:13  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send delboj a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Potrudi se malo oko pravopisa. Kad dolazim ovdje? Pa u sljedećoj rečenici stavio si kako treba "ovamo dolazim". I treba ovog puta, ne ovaj put. I pripazi oko upotrijebe prijedloga s.
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Tintilinic
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Posted - 19/01/2015 : 14:38:20  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tintilinic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Brdare, očekujem redovno nove table!
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
2770 Posts

Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 19/01/2015 : 15:30:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by delboj

Potrudi se malo oko pravopisa. Kad dolazim ovdje? Pa u sljedećoj rečenici stavio si kako treba "ovamo dolazim". I treba ovog puta, ne ovaj put. I pripazi oko upotrijebe prijedloga s.


Ispravljeno, hvala na savjetima.
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King Warrior
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Posted - 19/01/2015 : 15:32:53  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send King Warrior a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Samo naprijed.
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Humbert Coe
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Croatia
592 Posts

Member since 17/02/2005

Posted - 19/01/2015 : 16:50:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Humbert Coe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by delboj

Potrudi se malo oko pravopisa. Kad dolazim ovdje? Pa u sljedećoj rečenici stavio si kako treba "ovamo dolazim". I treba ovog puta, ne ovaj put. I pripazi oko upotrijebe prijedloga s.


Ispravno je i ovaj put i ovoga puta. Radi se o vremenskom akuzativu i genitivu. Prošli put - prošloga puta, svaki dan - svakoga dana i sl.

I upotrijebe = upotrebe.
Humbert Coe
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Boston Jack
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Posted - 19/01/2015 : 21:25:00  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Boston Jack a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Sviđa mi se jako tema i atmosfera u stripu. Nadam se da će nastaviti ići u tom smjeru, bez skretanja u geg, ili parodiju.
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 23/01/2015 : 02:41:38  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Da mi se ne dopada, ne bih ni komentarisao odlične table, ali; zar ne misliš da bi narativ bio efektniji da je pod crnom?

I, pritom, beli font.
Piši propalo!
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 23/01/2015 : 16:49:37  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hvala svima za savjete, podrsku, komentare, pracenje.

@ Boston Jack - nije geg ni parodija, ali bice svega u ovoj prici.

@ ned_lynx - prijedlog o narativu prihvacen u potpunosti, hvala lijepo (prve tri table uredit cu u narednim danima).


Idemo dalje, tabla 4.




Edited by - Brdar on 25/05/2015 19:32:36
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markotamara
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Croatia
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Posted - 23/01/2015 : 17:51:05  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send markotamara a Private Message  Reply with Quote
napalo te kao Fridu ;)
GALLIENO FERRI
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 23/01/2015 : 23:11:10  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by markotamara

napalo te kao Fridu ;)
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Tintilinic
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Posted - 24/01/2015 : 00:35:34  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tintilinic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Baš simpatičan strip, nestrpljivo čekam nove table
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 24/01/2015 : 02:51:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Isprva mi je Sky full of stars išlo na, khm, strpljenje, no, kako strip ide, valjda je to potreban kontrast.

Očito se lik suočava sa mračnim mislima koje roji, a vukodlak je, možebitno, tek prva stepenica.

A možda i ne!

Svejedno, pratim pomno!
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 02/02/2015 : 17:35:17  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Nista, samo sam apdejtovao prve table s crnim narativom.

Edited by - Brdar on 02/02/2015 17:38:12
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 05/02/2015 : 18:45:55  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 5.
Edited by - Brdar on 25/05/2015 19:33:44
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 10/02/2015 : 22:39:18  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 6.
Edited by - Brdar on 25/05/2015 19:35:14
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 12/02/2015 : 02:28:14  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Slanje avatara u transcedenciju?!

Bar ja to tako videh.

Sjajno!
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Brdar
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Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 12/02/2015 : 20:49:42  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by ned_lynx

Slanje avatara u transcedenciju?!

Bar ja to tako videh.

Sjajno!


Da, to je to. Drago mi je da ti se sviđa.
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Posted - 12/02/2015 : 20:51:09  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 7.
Edited by - Brdar on 06/09/2015 18:57:48
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 13/02/2015 : 02:49:00  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Prosto je višak konstatacija da "Mašta može svašta" sa table broj pet, a to se, još nepotrebnije, ponavlja u tabli #7. To mi toliko smeta i odvlači pažnju da prosto moram da reagujem sledećim pitanjem:

Da li postoji razlog zašto je to tako, a meni je, eto, nevidljiv?
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King Warrior
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Member since 10/11/2007

Posted - 13/02/2015 : 08:12:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send King Warrior a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pretpostavljam da poenta tek slijedi. Uglavnom, ja sam se navukao na ovu pricu.
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PijaniPatak
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Germany
10035 Posts

Member since 20/02/2010

Posted - 13/02/2015 : 12:38:07  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send PijaniPatak a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Crtež bolji nego ikad, kolor isto tako
priču još uvek čekam pa neću da komentarišem

p.s.i meni je suvišna poslednja konstatacija. Radij bih naglasio stanje nihilizma lika/tebe kroz nešto tipa "bah, idemo dalje" ili samo zameniti "mašta može svašta" sa nečim što samo aludira na to.

što se ostalog tiče, samo "nastavi dalje" :)
DNEVNIK CITANJA:
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 13/02/2015 : 15:17:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hvala svima za pracenje stripa, komentare, sugestije, pohvale.

Naravno da postoji razlog zasto naglasavam da ''masta moze svasta'' i to ce biti obrazlozeno nesto kasnije u toku price.
Edited by - Brdar on 13/02/2015 15:18:01
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
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Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 17/02/2015 : 11:36:44  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 8.
Edited by - Brdar on 25/05/2015 19:38:03
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Brdar
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Bosnia and Herzegovina
2770 Posts

Member since 22/10/2003

Posted - 19/02/2015 : 18:46:55  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Brdar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla 9.
Edited by - Brdar on 25/05/2015 19:39:41
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ned_lynx
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Posted - 21/02/2015 : 03:14:54  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Upečatljivo je dočarana teskoba i mračnjaštvo, a kasnije i jezovitost ambijenta i (mogućih) privida i/ili pojava; pritom je, skoro svaka tabla, klifhenger.

Vr.

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