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Boston Jack
stripovi.com suradnik
166 Posts Member since 26/05/2010
Torghal
Senior Member
Croatia
1985 Posts Member since 27/09/2004
Tintilinic
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2955 Posts Member since 15/07/2013
D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7144 Posts Member since 21/07/2002
ned_lynx
Senior Member
2340 Posts Member since 06/08/2005
Posted - 09/11/2014 : 02:44:09
Sve je to dojajno, no, mene grebe nešto što me više vuče na gledanje Wroooooooomp!!! Zar je baš ta neonka morala da bude učesnica u onomatopeji?
Piši propalo!
kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Posted - 09/11/2014 : 11:22:38
Originally posted by ned_lynx Zar je baš ta neonka morala da bude učesnica u onomatopeji? U pravu si, i meni je to zapalo za oko.... ali to su samo probne (radne) table da vidimo kako scenarista/crtac/kolorista funkcionisu kao tim.
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Torghal
Senior Member
Croatia
1985 Posts Member since 27/09/2004
kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7144 Posts Member since 21/07/2002
Torghal
Senior Member
Croatia
1985 Posts Member since 27/09/2004
Tonto
Advanced Member
8954 Posts Member since 11/02/2012
Posted - 03/02/2015 : 21:20:19
Mislim da bi u prvom kadru bilo bolje da je zemlja jednobojna, bez ovih vijugavih tamnijih linija. Osim toga obojano je izvrsno.
The less I have the more I am a happy man
Tintilinic
Senior Member
2955 Posts Member since 15/07/2013
kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Boston Jack
stripovi.com suradnik
166 Posts Member since 26/05/2010
kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Posted - 20/04/2015 : 18:14:46
Originally posted by Boston Jack Bravo momci, odličan kolor i crtež! Sad još samo treba vidjeti kakva je priča :) Pa ne mozemo furati table s tekstom, ovo sam samo malo ubacio cisto da zagolicamo mastu. Svakako, hvala na paznji i kritikama.
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Zox
Senior Member
1183 Posts Member since 04/06/2002
D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7144 Posts Member since 21/07/2002
kriticni
New Member
Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Posted - 21/04/2015 : 18:53:11
Originally posted by Zox Ovdje se fakat nema šta reći, u tom žanru, to je zaista to! Sisa Hvala Zox Originally posted by D.J. Bravo! Koji detalji, a opet jako pregledno! Za koji ti to format radis?! Hvala Sefe... pa americki valjda, zar se ne vidi?
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik
USA
7144 Posts Member since 21/07/2002
Posted - 21/04/2015 : 19:13:15
Originally posted by kriticni Originally posted by D.J. Bravo! Koji detalji, a opet jako pregledno! Za koji ti to format radis?! Hvala Sefe... pa americki valjda, zar se ne vidi? Da samo to je za neku super deluxe verziju! Ako te "Vrancuzi" vide nema ti spasa s tom detaljnom arhitekturom. Napustit ces ti "Freedom Fries" za good ol' "Pommes frites".
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kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
Posted - 21/04/2015 : 19:41:44
Originally posted by D.J. Da samo to je za neku super deluxe verziju! Ako te "Vrancuzi" vide nema ti spasa s tom detaljnom arhitekturom. Napustit ces ti "Freedom Fries" za good ol' "Pommes frites". Francuzi u srcu Wiki eto kaze da je ovo standard! E sad, mozda se u medjuvremenu nesto promjenilo kod vas preko bare, ali evo da te obradujem ovim putem, i Davorov strip je u istom formatu, sto ce reci - spremi se za deluxe izdanje
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zokalav
Senior Member
2053 Posts Member since 24/08/2010
Posted - 22/04/2015 : 21:23:40
Odlično je sve kritični! Meni jedino para oči krupan font na tvojim tablama i malo veći prored između redova.
Edited by - zokalav on 22/04/2015 21:24:39
kriticni
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Serbia
279 Posts Member since 04/12/2009
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