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Torghal
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Croatia
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 20:37:15  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Nedavno se jednoj osobi koju poznajem desilo nesto sta me inspiriralo da pocmen ovaj strip.Sama ideja je inspirirana tim dogadjajem,sve ostalo ce bit plod moje maste.Ionako iman previse zapocetih projekata tako da san se boria sa samin sobon da ovo ne pocinjem dok ne dovrsim ostale stripove ali izgubia san tu borbu.Ionako ce meni vremenski tribat za zavrsit ovih 4-5 stripova koliko i nekom pravom crtacu da zavrsi jedan.Ali obeca sam samom sebi da necu zapocet vise nijedan strip dok ne zavrsim sve zapocete.Pa makar mi pala na pamet ideja u rangu Svagdasnje borbe .
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Edited by - Torghal on 04/11/2014 22:24:37

Johnny Difool
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Croatia
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 21:07:15  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Johnny Difool a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Čekam nastavak i slutim tragičan ili makar tužan kraj.
Ja necu imati s kim ostati mlad ako svi ostarite,
i ta ce mi mladost teško pasti...
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik



USA
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 21:18:34  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by Johnny Difool

Čekam nastavak i slutim tragičan ili makar tužan kraj.

Ti volis igrati na sigurno, zar ne!
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Zoroasterixx
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Croatia
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 21:23:02  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Zoroasterixx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I ovo izgleda dobro, samo nećeš li se ovako pogubiti u moru započetih projekata, Torghale?
Sad ima barem 3-4 stripa koja treba završiti.
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Johnny Difool
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 21:37:49  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Johnny Difool a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by D.J.

Originally posted by Johnny Difool

Čekam nastavak i slutim tragičan ili makar tužan kraj.

Ti volis igrati na sigurno, zar ne!




S doktorima koji su bili izričito protiv... i s njenim mršavljenjem i nije teško "igrati na sigurno".

Edit: a njena promjena boje kose možda znači nošenje perike zbog ćelavosti uslijed kemoterapije. Bit će tužno.
Ja necu imati s kim ostati mlad ako svi ostarite,
i ta ce mi mladost teško pasti...
Edited by - Johnny Difool on 04/11/2014 23:21:27
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 21:40:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by Zoroasterixx

I ovo izgleda dobro, samo nećeš li se ovako pogubiti u moru započetih projekata, Torghale?
Sad ima barem 3-4 stripa koja treba završiti.

O tome san pisa u uvodnom postu.Kako se sad osjecam ovo i Mirakul3 ce mi bit prioriteti.Ostalo nakon sta ova dva zavrsim.
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mladjo
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Croatia
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 22:13:03  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send mladjo a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Mali problemčić - treća tabla, jedno "ne" je viška
COUNT ZERO INTERRUPT
an interrupt of a process decrements a counter to zero
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Torghal
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 22:21:32  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by mladjo

Mali problemčić - treća tabla, jedno "ne" je viška

Hvala mladjo,sto puta san cita tu tablu a to nisan primjetia.
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mladjo
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Posted - 04/11/2014 : 22:32:22  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send mladjo a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Zato je tu drug moderator
COUNT ZERO INTERRUPT
an interrupt of a process decrements a counter to zero
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

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Posted - 06/11/2014 : 20:46:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.7

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sergej773
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Cuba
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Posted - 06/11/2014 : 22:45:06  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send sergej773 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Kako optimističan strip. :D
Kao i svi od Torgala. :D
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Torghal
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1985 Posts

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Posted - 07/11/2014 : 21:26:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.9
Edited by - Torghal on 13/12/2014 20:38:12
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Tintilinic
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Posted - 08/11/2014 : 01:44:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Tintilinic a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Dobro za sad, čekamo nove table.
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Torghal
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Posted - 09/11/2014 : 19:46:58  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.10
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Torghal
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Posted - 13/12/2014 : 20:38:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ponovo san nacrta devetu tablu,u prvoj verziji glavni lik nije bas licia na samog sebe.
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Torghal
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Posted - 01/03/2015 : 15:39:51  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Marina je priselila na http://www.mojstrip.com/ pa koga zanima nastavak stripa moze ga dalje pratit tamo uz ostale odlicne stripove koji se tamo nalaze.Svaki mjesec ce ic po desetak tabli.
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Torghal
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Posted - 05/12/2015 : 15:35:53  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Strip je gotov pa ako nekoga zanima a da ga nije dosad pratia moze ga procitat ovde:
http://www.mojstrip.com/strip/marina-se-smije-radoja
a moze ga i downloadati u jednom od formata za citanje e-stripova:
CBR: http://www.mojstrip.com/cbr.php?strip=marina-se-smije-radoja
PDF: http://www.mojstrip.com/pdf.php?strip=marina-se-smije-radoja
ePub: http://www.mojstrip.com/epub.php…
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Antracit
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Croatia
509 Posts

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Posted - 10/12/2015 : 12:01:01  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Antracit a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Uh, baš znaš pogoditi u žicu!
Svaka čast, odličan strip!
Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

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Posted - 10/12/2015 : 19:40:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by Antracit

Uh, baš znaš pogoditi u žicu!
Svaka čast, odličan strip!

Hvala puno!
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D.J.
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Posted - 10/12/2015 : 20:04:05  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I ja sam sad procitao strip. Jako, jako lijepo! Krenule su mi suze kod zadnjih nekoliko stranica.
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Torghal
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Posted - 10/12/2015 : 20:37:47  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by D.J.

I ja sam sad procitao strip. Jako, jako lijepo! Krenule su mi suze kod zadnjih nekoliko stranica.

Hvala Igore,znas da jako cijenim tvoje misljenje tako da mi ovo puno znaci.
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kriticni
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Serbia
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Posted - 11/12/2015 : 16:24:22  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send kriticni a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Rekoh sebi necu ga citati dok ne zavrse predstojeci praznici... sjebace mi praznicnu atmosferu... ali Radoja je opet pobjedio, nisam mogao odoliti, procitao sam ga.

Bravo prijatelju, bravo!
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Torghal
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Posted - 11/12/2015 : 19:02:34  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by kriticni

Rekoh sebi necu ga citati dok ne zavrse predstojeci praznici... sjebace mi praznicnu atmosferu... ali Radoja je opet pobjedio, nisam mogao odoliti, procitao sam ga.

Bravo prijatelju, bravo!


Hvala,drago mi je da san te oraspolozia
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Gru
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Posted - 13/12/2015 : 22:27:34  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Gru a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ovo nisam htio čitati sve dok ne dovedeš do kraja i nakon čitanja mogu samo reći: Kapa dolje majstore!
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Torghal
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Posted - 13/12/2015 : 22:37:28  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Originally posted by Gru

Ovo nisam htio čitati sve dok ne dovedeš do kraja i nakon čitanja mogu samo reći: Kapa dolje majstore!

Hvala.
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Zox
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Posted - 14/12/2015 : 23:10:24  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Zox's Homepage  Send Zox a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Cestitam!
Jako zanimljivo i dosta duboko stivo.
Imam zamjerku, bukvalno sitnicu, koja, ipak, ne mislim da umanjuju uzitak citanja, samo mislim da postoje stvari koje su ga mogle dodatno poboljsati.
Jednostavno, mislim da je prica (zaplet) za pola koplja ili vise iznad rezije (realizacije). Nekako, crtac Torghal kao da nije do kraja iskoristio potencijal scenariste Thorgala.
I pri tom ne mislim na stil, stilizaciju, koji su vrlo funkcionalni. Jednostavno, malo mi "smeta" neiskoristenost jezika stripa. Recimo, u epilogu, cijela didaskalija oko "poodmaklog stadijuma trudnoce" je beskorisna. Moglo se rijesiti tako da se srednji plan zene i muza presijece "kavezom" table napola (kako si to zamalo i ucinio) I da ritam citanja od jednog do drugog kadra, to jeste pokret citateljevog pogleda, otkrije da je zena trudna.
Ostalo bi nekako stripovskije, promisljenije, cisce.
Ali, ponavljam, to bi bilo nesto VISE, a I ovako se radi o jako dobrom stripu.
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