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goran split
Junior Member



Croatia
388 Posts

Member since 21/09/2010

Posted - 23/09/2011 : 14:21:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send goran split a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by cat claw

Pa da se posle pitamo da li je Zvone njegov sin?


mozda bi to objasnilo njegove reakcije na cilu situaciju

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Torghal
Senior Member



Croatia
1964 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 23/09/2011 : 17:25:54  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by cat claw

Odmah da kazemo, Thorgal ce aminovati likove.
Ja primedbe dajem sa nekakve... hm... urednicke pozicije, ako dozvolite. Potsecanja radi, urednici su face koje scenaristi i crtaci podjednako mrze.
Tatu bih ostavio crnog
Mami bih stavio neuredniju kosu, neku ofucanu hladnu trajnu...
Zvone bi morao imati blazi izraz ociju. Meni se on cini u celom stripu vise povredjen nego besan. Elem, ne bas da budu tuzne obrve, ali svakako ne ovako namrstene. OK kad je besan, al za obicne prilike bi trebalo da je blazi.


Slazem se sa svime sta ste napisali pogotovo sa ovim za majku...don Vjeko je super.Ja mogu aminovat likove iako mi ne bi bia problem ni da vi to napravite...ja mozda bolje poznajem te likove ali sta se tice crteza tu ste vi puno,puno mjerodavniji za nekakav sud.
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Darth Ivan
Advanced Member



Croatia
7978 Posts

Member since 21/03/2010

Posted - 23/09/2011 : 17:32:39  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Darth Ivan a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by dupli

Ne, baš si ti glavni za komentare jer znaš kraj, a to može uvelike utjecati na izgled likova.
Hvala svima na pohvalama.
Ima tu prostora za značajna poboljšanja, a i vid mi se polako vraća pa idemo dalje.




sve si odlično nacrtao, samo mi don Vjeko izgleda ko neki Terminatorov kolega

"Nothing lasts forever."
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dupli
Average Member

Croatia
979 Posts

Member since 26/11/2009

Posted - 26/09/2011 : 11:30:00  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send dupli a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Izgleda da tema i nije baš popularna. Šteta.
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Deers
Advanced Member



Croatia
9225 Posts

Member since 29/03/2004

Posted - 26/09/2011 : 11:54:39  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Deers a Private Message  Reply with Quote

"Trzaj mišica i nad prazninom sam."
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Torghal
Senior Member



Croatia
1964 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 26/09/2011 : 16:06:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by dupli

Izgleda da tema i nije baš popularna. Šteta.



Odlicno si ovo nacrta...cak si ubacija i nesto svoga(ovo sa izgorenom crkvom) sta mi se stvarno svidja.
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Snake Plissken
Average Member



Serbia
707 Posts

Member since 05/07/2011

Posted - 26/09/2011 : 21:03:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Snake Plissken a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pa to ce Zvone da zapali crkvu kad overi popa. :D

Snake Plissken wasn't born.
He escaped from the womb.
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dupli
Average Member

Croatia
979 Posts

Member since 26/11/2009

Posted - 28/09/2011 : 09:39:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send dupli a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ima zajeba al to će kolorist spasit
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Rico
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Croatia
3955 Posts

Member since 12/10/2004

Posted - 28/09/2011 : 10:07:20  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Rico's Homepage  Send Rico a Private Message  Reply with Quote
bomba!!!!!

https://www.instagram.com/ricomambo_tees/ https://www.facebook.com/brankoricovdesign
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goran split
Junior Member



Croatia
388 Posts

Member since 21/09/2010

Posted - 28/09/2011 : 11:56:23  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send goran split a Private Message  Reply with Quote
sve je extra,samo mi zvone nije bas,mozda zbog usiju :)

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Torghal
Senior Member



Croatia
1964 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 28/09/2011 : 18:14:37  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by dupli

Ima zajeba al to će kolorist spasit



super
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cat claw
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Member since 06/10/2007

Posted - 28/09/2011 : 22:29:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send cat claw a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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ken2
stripovi.com suradnik



Croatia
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Posted - 28/09/2011 : 22:50:13  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ken2 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
kada se mirakul iz tandema torghal/dupli dovrši i krene u izdavanje, ne dao vam bog da se ne objavi i originalni torghalov crtež
to bi bilo izdanje godine

if you tolerate this, then your children will be next
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik



USA
7057 Posts

Member since 21/07/2002

Posted - 28/09/2011 : 23:44:22  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
E to je to! Bravo cika Bane, sad je Zvone bez klempavih usiju, mater je opasnija, a Josipa emocionalnija. Spremno za produkciju.

www.epicentercomics.com
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Torghal
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Croatia
1964 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 29/09/2011 : 05:48:42  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by cat claw




Slazem se sa svime sta je D.J. napisa...to je to!
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Darth Ivan
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Croatia
7978 Posts

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Posted - 30/09/2011 : 01:07:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Darth Ivan a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Josipa s podočnjacima! XD

"Nothing lasts forever."
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dupli
Average Member

Croatia
979 Posts

Member since 26/11/2009

Posted - 30/09/2011 : 11:20:29  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send dupli a Private Message  Reply with Quote
S obzirom da je Torghal reko "to je to" nakon urednikovih intervencija, nastavljamo se igrati produkcije. Koliko mi je poznat proces sada se uredniku i scenaristu šalju one žvrljotine (kako im je službeni naziv?) gdje se vidi postavka table, likova i slično.

Scenarij:


Žvrljotina:

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Torghal
Senior Member



Croatia
1964 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 30/09/2011 : 17:27:46  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by dupli

S obzirom da je Torghal reko "to je to" nakon urednikovih intervencija, nastavljamo se igrati produkcije. Koliko mi je poznat proces sada se uredniku i scenaristu šalju one žvrljotine (kako im je službeni naziv?) gdje se vidi postavka table, likova i slično.

Scenarij:


Žvrljotina:




Odlicno kadrirano.tek sad vidim di sam moga bolje kadrirat.Sta se mene tice odlicno.
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J.Stickman
Junior Member



Bosnia and Herzegovina
364 Posts

Member since 28/10/2009

Posted - 30/09/2011 : 20:23:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit J.Stickman's Homepage  Send J.Stickman a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Uh, dobro kadriranje. Svaka čast dupli.

https://www.instagram.com/avet_rio_gribaje/
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Amos
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Croatia
2896 Posts

Member since 03/01/2011

Posted - 30/09/2011 : 21:14:52  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Amos a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Dupli je majstor!

Uža san gledati Inspektora Rexa, ali odusta san kad su prominili pasa.
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PijaniPatak
stripovi.com suradnik



Germany
10032 Posts

Member since 20/02/2010

Posted - 15/10/2011 : 22:51:56  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send PijaniPatak a Private Message  Reply with Quote



Mozda nisam najkompetentniji da dam komentar na ovo, ali jako mi se svidela prica (Bravo Torghy) pa bih sugerisao nesto.
Majka na prvoj slici mi je karakterno mnogo vise onoj koju je autor predstavio citaocima. Mora biti vise prgave naravi i mnogo odbojnija kao lik i da ne iska od citaoca previse sazaljenja (u drugoj slici skoro da zaplace). Posto im je zivot sjeban, njen odbrambeni mehanizam odvratak karakter a ne tihi lament kako je prikazano u drugoj. Otac, s druge strane, uopste ne reprezentuje tihog i odanog muza koji masta kako ce zenu poslati dovraga. Na slici izgleda strog i psihicki jako stabilan. Nije od ljudi koji pate u tisini i koji nema muda (ili je izgubio volje) da protivreci ikome. Mislim da je taj utisak zbog obrva. Malo ih poravnajte da budu manje prirodne namrstene.
Ostali su i po meni, sto bi Torghal rekao, 'to je to'.

Tehnicki nemam zamerki. Dupli je odlican crtac i u tom stripu bih voleo videti bas ovakav stil crtanja, sa cistijim i jasnijim kontrastima, bez filozofiranja sa prevelikim brojem detalja. Svaka cast Dupli!

I bez zamerki molim. Stalo mi je da ovo bude bas dobro, posto je podloga za to i vise nego solidna.

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PijaniPatak
stripovi.com suradnik



Germany
10032 Posts

Member since 20/02/2010

Posted - 20/10/2011 : 01:38:37  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send PijaniPatak a Private Message  Reply with Quote
WTF sta je ovo? Ne mogu da verujem da se 20-ak dana nista ovde ne desava?

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Sneaksie Thiefsie
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Member since 22/04/2008

Posted - 12/11/2011 : 13:03:27  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Sneaksie Thiefsie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
dodje mi da nesto nacrtam
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Batta
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Member since 16/07/2011

Posted - 16/11/2011 : 23:49:39  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Batta a Yahoo! Message  Send Batta a Private Message  Reply with Quote
A jel mogu ja nesto da okacim a da nema veze sa Thorgalom i njegovim likovima?

http://corbaatilaart.blogspot.com/
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Batta
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Posted - 17/11/2011 : 10:50:49  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Batta a Yahoo! Message  Send Batta a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Izgleda da nemoze,pa dobro...

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