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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 27/01/2013 : 20:33:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ovako ide prica.Ne sicam se sad tocno kad ali ima sigurno bar 7-8 miseci da me je jedan kolega sa foruma pita bi li mu napisa scenarij od 4 table za neki natjecaj stripova u Beogradu.Iskreno nije mi se dalo ali posto ja ne znam kako ljudima rec ne prista sam na to i napisa sam scenarij za prve 3 table no poslije toga se momak nije vise javlja i ja sam stavia nedovrsen scenarij sa strane.S vrimena na vrime bi se sitia tog scenarija i palo mi je na pamet da ja nacrtam strip pa da ga posaljem Macanu za ponedjeljaq,ali posto me Macan vec jedanput odbia bilo me strah da ce se i ovaj put ponovit isto pa sam od toga odusta.U medjuvremenu se prica u glavi razvijala i rasla pa sam odlucia od te kratke price napravit jedan duzi strip.Mislia sam sacekat da zavrsim Boje pa ga onda pocet crtat ali posto su Boje jos daleko od kraja a poznavajuci sebe strip bi vjerovatno opet pao u zaborav odlucia sam ga pocet crtat sada.Svaku nedjelju po jedna tabla a kad zavrse Boje onda vjerovatno brzim tempom.Strip ce bit nesto drugaciji od ovog sta sam dosad crta(nece bit pohotnih svecenika,ludih skinsa i slicno) pa nisam siguran oce li se kome svidit ali vidit cemo.
Tabla br.1
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sandyboy
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628 Posts

Member since 09/09/2010

Posted - 27/01/2013 : 20:38:23  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send sandyboy a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tekst u drugom panelu
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Johnny Difool
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Croatia
13988 Posts

Member since 21/02/2010

Posted - 27/01/2013 : 23:03:35  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Johnny Difool a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Malo je predoslovno jer već u drugoj sličici skužiš u čemu je štos, ali je simpatično.

Da je dramaturški to malo drugačije riješiti, recimo zamijeniti slike (ne tekst!) 2 i 4, bilo bi bolje jer bi "iznenađenje" bilo na kraju.
Ja necu imati s kim ostati mlad ako svi ostarite,
i ta ce mi mladost teško pasti...
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Just_Charlie
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Posted - 29/01/2013 : 01:36:06  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit Just_Charlie's Homepage  Send Just_Charlie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by sandyboy

Tekst u drugom panelu


upravo tako
ne mogu docekati dalje!

~ Prvo suputnik onda put ~
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bisley
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Croatia
1196 Posts

Member since 08/06/2005

Posted - 29/01/2013 : 07:55:07  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send bisley a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tekst u drugom panelu. Nije ni žena više njegova . Odavno
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mladjo
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Croatia
20013 Posts

Member since 15/04/2007

Posted - 02/02/2013 : 19:11:48  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send mladjo a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Dobro ovo zgleda
COUNT ZERO INTERRUPT
an interrupt of a process decrements a counter to zero
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ned_lynx
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2340 Posts

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Posted - 03/02/2013 : 00:36:26  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send ned_lynx a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Nekad je dobro kako izgleda prva tabla, a loše neznanje - kada će druga doć'?

Vreme joj je.
Piši propalo!
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

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Posted - 03/02/2013 : 20:21:39  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.2
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

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Posted - 10/02/2013 : 22:45:31  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.3
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Torghal
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Croatia
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Posted - 20/02/2013 : 23:08:03  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.4

Tabla br.5
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going going
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Serbia
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Posted - 22/02/2013 : 16:16:30  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send going going a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Zanimljivo za sada!
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mamlaz
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Croatia
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Posted - 04/03/2013 : 21:08:29  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit mamlaz's Homepage  Send mamlaz a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ajmo nastavak:)
Mrzim mrznju!
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tinton
stripovi.com suradnik

United Kingdom
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Posted - 04/03/2013 : 21:35:45  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send tinton a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by mamlaz

ajmo nastavak:)
Dajte nam Banija Libre;može i mekokoricen (ali u boji obavezno)!
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

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Posted - 04/03/2013 : 21:44:29  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by mamlaz

ajmo nastavak:)

Najvjerovatnije sutra,najkasnije prekosutra...tri table.
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 05/03/2013 : 23:05:30  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.6

Tabla br.7

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paro
stripovi.com suradnik



Croatia
8619 Posts

Member since 30/03/2005

Posted - 05/03/2013 : 23:15:11  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit paro's Homepage  Send paro a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Torghale, dal si ideje za priče skupljao i bilježio negdje, pa ih sad istresaš na papir ili ti jednostavno dolaze iz dana u dan?

Ovo sam te možda već prije pitao, ako jesam sorry šta se ponavljam..
Odličan početak btw. (kao i uvijek zapravo)
There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die.
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 05/03/2013 : 23:19:58  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by paro

Torghale, dal si ideje za priče skupljao i bilježio negdje, pa ih sad istresaš na papir ili ti jednostavno dolaze iz dana u dan?

Ovo sam te možda već prije pitao, ako jesam sorry šta se ponavljam..
Odličan početak btw. (kao i uvijek zapravo)

Ma jednostavno dolaze iz dana u dan,nista ti ja ne skupljam ni ne biljezim,sve su u mojoj glavi i cekaju da dodju na red.
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D.J.
stripovi.com suradnik



USA
7144 Posts

Member since 21/07/2002

Posted - 05/03/2013 : 23:51:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send D.J. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Je, bas tako, jos jedan fantastican pocetak stripa! Jednostavno nas uvlaci u pricu. Stvarno mi je super sto se glavni lik obraca citateljima, a i naziva nas luzerima!
www.epicentercomics.com
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Barker
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Fyro Macedonia
4682 Posts

Member since 10/10/2003

Posted - 06/03/2013 : 06:49:06  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Barker a Private Message  Reply with Quote
horde fanova te verno slede na svakom novom stripu! me included! :)
Bistro i duboko nebo utociste pruza!
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mamlaz
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Croatia
9955 Posts

Member since 28/02/2004

Posted - 06/03/2013 : 11:40:23  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit mamlaz's Homepage  Send mamlaz a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Bravo, bravo, odlican uvod. samo nastavi
Mrzim mrznju!
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PijaniPatak
stripovi.com suradnik



Germany
10035 Posts

Member since 20/02/2010

Posted - 06/03/2013 : 13:44:49  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send PijaniPatak a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Odlično Torghale, teraj dalje. Ne komentarišem mnogo ali potajice pratim tvoj rad. Sve za 5
DNEVNIK CITANJA:
Etika junaštva i deklišeizirani koreni u “Zagor prica...”
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 08/03/2013 : 21:26:18  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.9

Tabla br.10
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lwood
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Colombia
47575 Posts

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Posted - 08/03/2013 : 21:49:43  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send lwood a Private Message  Reply with Quote
aj priznaj da si ideju o plaču skupia iz "Rana"
You stared at the abyss, you'll never rest in peace
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paro
stripovi.com suradnik



Croatia
8619 Posts

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Posted - 08/03/2013 : 22:20:59  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Visit paro's Homepage  Send paro a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by lwood

aj priznaj da si ideju o plaču skupia iz "Rana"


Dobro drugovi, predomislio sam se, neka bude Ramiz...Ne, ne Pinky, neka bude Pinky
There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die.
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 09/03/2013 : 15:00:25  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by lwood

aj priznaj da si ideju o plaču skupia iz "Rana"

Ne priznajem nista i branim se sutnjomSalim se,a vjerovatno jesam nesvjesno preuzea tu ideju iz Rana kao sta su i mnoge druge ideje iz mojih stripova preuzete iz stvarnog zivota,filmova,stripova,knjiga...
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Torghal
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Croatia
1985 Posts

Member since 27/09/2004

Posted - 09/03/2013 : 23:04:31  Show Profile Show Extended Profile  Send Torghal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Tabla br.11

Tabla br.12
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